Spirit Walk

by Spartacus2012Biloxi, Mississippi, USA

Oct 2013 940 Views 23 comments

Spirit Walk

Author: Spartacus2012

I am asleep
I dream
I am flying

I am the sky
outside myself
above streets and buildings

Time and place
are nonexistent
I am moonlight
staring back at the sun

Updrafts of light
echoes off distant plateaus
above the blue earth
into the sparkling void

walking up the stars
through the nine heavens
and all the nine earths

I am me
set free
so astrally
in a sea of ecstacy...

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Posted: Oct 2013

About this poem:

Astral projection poem..

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ladyjewelDurban, KwaZulu-Natal South AfricaOct 6, 2013

just lovely, when you can just be your soul and feel so free, must be like astro traveling, would love to be able to do that

loved the picture

Poetnumber1St James, Port of Spain Trinidad and TobagoOct 6, 2013

From one romantic to another, this was bloody hell brilliant.

Serenity4twoDonegal, IrelandOct 6, 2013

now this is out of this world

really good Ken ,, well done -I liked this -warm regards -F

francie2013Tangerang, Banten IndonesiaOct 6, 2013

Spartacus2012OPBiloxi, Mississippi USAOct 6, 2013

Hey poet buddy,
Thank you for the warmest compliment...

Ken

Spartacus2012OPBiloxi, Mississippi USAOct 6, 2013

Hi Fiona,
Thank you for visiting my humble verse my lovely friend..

Ken

Spartacus2012OPBiloxi, Mississippi USAOct 6, 2013

Hello Francie,
Thanks for stopping by today and the thumbs up..

Ken

darkhorse555donegal, Donegal IrelandOct 6, 2013

excellent piece of writing my dear friend

rapturecapturekerry, Kerry IrelandOct 6, 2013

Hi Ken

Lovely way of looking at oneself..beautiful poem

Thank you for sharing

Martina xxx

Spartacus2012OPBiloxi, Mississippi USAOct 6, 2013

Hi Liam,
Thanks buddy for the wonderful visit today..

Ken

Spartacus2012OPBiloxi, Mississippi USAOct 6, 2013

Hey Martina,
Thanks for stopping by and great to read from you as always..

Ken

diana_1San fernando, San Fernando Trinidad and TobagoOct 6, 2013

I am in complete agreement, Ken, with everyone... absolutely brilliant as Poet said I think...

Spartacus2012OPBiloxi, Mississippi USAOct 6, 2013

Hi Diana,
Thank you for the splendid comment..

Ken

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socrates44San Fernando, Trinidad and TobagoOct 7, 2013

This piece transports one to a different dimension with mystical connotations.
An out-of-this-world experience!
Well Done!

Spartacus2012OPBiloxi, Mississippi USAOct 7, 2013

Hi Socrates,
Thanks for visiting today...

Ken

beautifulyouNew York, USAOct 7, 2013

Hi Ken,
I enjoyed this... it's a really neat write and I agree with socrates.. the mystical overtone is striking...

Spartacus2012OPBiloxi, Mississippi USAOct 7, 2013

Hi B.Y.,
Thank you for the wonderful comment on my humble verse..

Regards,
Ken

wayne34liverpool, Merseyside, England UKOct 7, 2013

Out of body experience now that's a good write enjoyed this creative write

Spartacus2012OPBiloxi, Mississippi USAOct 7, 2013

Hi Wayne,
Thank you for stopping by today..

Regards,
Ken

weemick1960Fife, Scotland UKOct 7, 2013

Hi Ken, he's back, worse luck. Loved it partner. To go beyond the stars is a great feeling. To know the things that most people may never know until there time to cross the veil comes. To cross the timeless sea with Love in your heart, to be as a star moving through the cosmos of both thought and reality. This one is special. Come one night and join the brothers and sisters in the Halls of the mighty and Heaven's doors shall be opened to you. Forever walk in the light my friend and no hiding the heart. Love is the way.
Catch you later.
Your Friend....MIKE.

Spartacus2012OPBiloxi, Mississippi USAOct 7, 2013

Hi Mike,
Good to read from you my friend..thanks for reading my humble verse and the wonderful comments..

Ken

fjamesj9701DunkinDonuts, Florida USAOct 8, 2013

Cool imagery Mr Ken, really good stuff. I am intrigued by astral projection myself but meditations and dreams are as close as I can get. Maybe in another time in the after it wont be but a walk in the park Good stuff my friend...Jesse

Spartacus2012OPBiloxi, Mississippi USAOct 8, 2013

Hi Jesse,
Thanks for the kind compliment and for the visit my friend..

Regards,
Ken