bouquet treasure

by darkhorse555Donegal, Ireland

Oct 2013 563 Views 18 comments

bouquet treasure

in so much colour
wrapped in one tune
plays enchanting music
upon a tin whistle
dancing upon ripples
whistling pipes
played within
the ocean
a boat
sailing calm waters
coming ashore

out of the shadows
of oneself
i seek
the answers
in darkness
calling for light
brushing the dark
a silver mist
sunshine sparking
within two eyes
a candle held
lighting one soul

oh colourful beauty
rainbows one treasure
shining bright
upon mist
i found
at a rainbow end
one promise
made to love
is the light
of you

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Posted: Oct 2013

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Comments (18)

Serenity4twoDonegal, IrelandOct 13, 2013

a very Celtic theme wrapped up in this beautiful " bouquet" Liam .. gorgeous writing indeed ! loved this ! warm regards as always -F

mcradloffPlatteville, Wisconsin USAOct 13, 2013

I always pictured the pot of gold at the end of the rainbow, but a good woman would be better, good write.

Spartacus2012Biloxi, Mississippi USAOct 13, 2013

Hey buddy,
Wonderful romantic write my friend..

Ken

Dejavu4uSomewhere, West Virginia USAOct 13, 2013

I enjoyed your poem. It was so romantic. Blessings,

weemick1960Fife, Scotland UKOct 13, 2013

Hi Liam, she walked out of a rainbow, well you can't beat that my friend. The magic lives deep inside the rainbow, as the magic lives deep inside your write. The music of the heart plays, out of your own night you call out to the light and from the rainbow comes forth your dream. What more can any reader wish for? You have your own special way in writing your pieces and it is a good way. Let's see, what can i say that i haven't said already. Oh yes, i put you in the same league as MM and Ken. Need i say more, i don't think so. Have a nice day Liam. Catch you later. Your Friend....MIKE.

darkhorse555OPdonegal, Donegal IrelandNov 12, 2013

fiona thank you for the amazing beautiful comment deeply appreciated dear friend

nonsmokerWaterford, IrelandNov 12, 2013

pretty cool, Darkhorse

trurorobAlicante, Valencia SpainNov 12, 2013

Enjoyable write DH
Rob

darkhorse555OPdonegal, Donegal IrelandNov 12, 2013

mcradloff treasured pot of god wonderful comment dear friend smiling beautiful deeply appreciated

darkhorse555OPdonegal, Donegal IrelandNov 12, 2013

ken thank you for the beautiful comment dear friend deeply appreciated

darkhorse555OPdonegal, Donegal IrelandJan 6, 2014

pink thank you so kindly for the wonderful comment deeply appreciated

darkhorse555OPdonegal, Donegal IrelandJan 6, 2014

mike thank you so much dear friend for the amazing comment heartfelt beautiful deeply appreciated

sundayrose1san francisco, California USAJan 6, 2014

out of the shadows
of oneself
i seek
the answers
in darkness
calling for light
brushing the dark
a silver mist
sunshine sparking
within two eyes
a candle held
lighting one soul

My dearest Liam, this is one beautiful presentation when all we do is being out there in the dark seeking for answers and voila, out of the blue, it comes...I used to drive to the highest point of the place wherever I live, and enjoy the darkness that envelopes me, occasionally I see the stars fall off the heavens and what a magnificent sight. Then just commune with the vastness and the spirituality of the universe, looking down the city and then looking back up in the sky.

Take care my friend...Love you both

Phyllis