Shooting Star

shadow1950

by shadow1950taunton, Somerset, England, UK

Oct 2013 488 Views 15 comments

Shooting Star

Author: shadow1950

Glittering silver
shooting star arches the sky
disappearing fast

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Posted: Oct 2013

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Comments (15)

ladyjewel

ladyjewelDurban, KwaZulu-Natal South AfricaOct 22, 2013

loved the 'arches the sky' can imagine a star being shot from a bow

lovely Linda

fjamesj9701

fjamesj9701DunkinDonuts, Florida USAOct 22, 2013

Simply Shadow

...Jesse

rapturecapture

rapturecapturekerry, Kerry IrelandOct 22, 2013

Hi Shadow

This is so lovely...you capture it well.
Thank you for sharing

Martina xxx

beautifulyou

beautifulyouNew York, USAOct 22, 2013

Hi shadow,

nice hon!
thanks for this
and hope all is well

Poetnumber1

Poetnumber1St James, Port of Spain Trinidad and TobagoOct 22, 2013

Lovely work Linda

cherryreggae

cherryreggaebayside, New York USAOct 22, 2013

Little words big impact shadow,,,great job:) enjoyed

socrates44

socrates44San Fernando, Trinidad and TobagoOct 22, 2013

Hi Shadow

This is a perfect 5-7-5 Haiku painting a beautiful picture of a shooting star from The Haiku Master. Well done!
Have a wonderful day!

Redex

RedexNorthumberland, England UKOct 23, 2013

Beautiful Haiku and the image too

shadow1950

shadow1950OPtaunton, Somerset, England UKOct 23, 2013

hi Sir Jesse simply me lol Ty dear

shadow1950

shadow1950OPtaunton, Somerset, England UKOct 23, 2013

hi Martina so nice to see you Ty I value your review

shadow1950

shadow1950OPtaunton, Somerset, England UKOct 23, 2013

hi Beautifulyou all good Ty hope with you too? Ty for reading and enjoying

shadow1950

shadow1950OPtaunton, Somerset, England UKOct 23, 2013

dearest MM Ty my friend appreciated as always

shadow1950

shadow1950OPtaunton, Somerset, England UKOct 23, 2013

hi Cherry Reggie nice to see you and ty glad you enjoyed it

shadow1950

shadow1950OPtaunton, Somerset, England UKOct 23, 2013

hi Socrates and Ty I appreciate your feedback

shadow1950

shadow1950OPtaunton, Somerset, England UKOct 23, 2013

hi Redex Ty so much how are you getting on? Still finding Haiku hard? glad you enjoyed this

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