if i were an IPod

by fjamesj9701DunkinDonuts, Florida, USA

Oct 2013 826 Views 26 comments

if i were an IPod

Author: Droopy D

if i were an IPod by fjamesj9701, on Flickr

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Posted: Oct 2013

About this poem:

an older post i am reposting after reading RavensGold "Game of Death" and Odettas "Gray Wolf" and so this is my contribution to the matter of irresponsible pet owners and cruel SOB's across the globe. If you click on the poem itself you would see the hound dog beside it

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Comments (26)

ladyjewelDurban, KwaZulu-Natal South AfricaOct 22, 2013

love it, soo very true, hugsssss

darkhorse555donegal, Donegal IrelandOct 22, 2013

excellently penned dear friend enjoyed your vision

rapturecapturekerry, Kerry IrelandOct 22, 2013

Hi Jesse

Woof Woof... you got my tail wagging with this one, lol
Wonderful thoughts and a perfect ending

Loved it

Thank you for sharing

Martina xxx

Spartacus2012Biloxi, Mississippi USAOct 22, 2013

Good stuff Jesse..

Ken

Poetnumber1St James, Port of Spain Trinidad and TobagoOct 22, 2013

Good stuff Skywalker. You give voice to the speechless. Inspiring personification poem my friend.

fjamesj9701OPDunkinDonuts, Florida USAOct 22, 2013

Thank you LJ , so glad you stopped by, always a pleasure...Jesse

fjamesj9701OPDunkinDonuts, Florida USAOct 22, 2013

Thank you LDH, always glad to see you my friend

fjamesj9701OPDunkinDonuts, Florida USAOct 22, 2013

Martina far to adorables with the woofing, but seriously thank you for your time and thoughts, always a pleasure...Jesse

fjamesj9701OPDunkinDonuts, Florida USAOct 22, 2013

Ken, thank you my friend glad you stopped by...Jesse

fjamesj9701OPDunkinDonuts, Florida USAOct 22, 2013

Thank you Mr MMPNUnO1B, hope your in better spirits today my friend, glad to see you stop by...Jesse

RedexNorthumberland, England UKOct 23, 2013

As I read your poem I thought this can't be true all the people I know love their dogs and treat them like kids. Me I am often left bewildered at such dedication. Don't get me wrong I would not could not hurt an animal. Then yes it is true some people are cruel to animals too.
I enjoyed reading and the dog looks ahhh lovely forlorn as it were.

fjamesj9701OPDunkinDonuts, Florida USAOct 23, 2013

Hey Red, well yes unfortunately there are a lot of pet owner who lack that resibility. Sometimes animals are the unfortunate kick ball or just simply tied up in the back yard and forgotten. I thank you for ur time and thought. Always my pleasure ...Jesse

Odette67Penrith, Cumbria, England UKOct 23, 2013

Dear Jesse,

This is a truly excellent poem, I love it, I would love to print this off for my daughter Lisa,
she owns a dog salon and is getting to meet
so many different pooches. Lisa is like me,
we care more for animals than some of the human toads that suround us. My heart melts when I look into
those beautiful eyes here.
Well done, and thank you for this gem of a poem. :-)

fjamesj9701OPDunkinDonuts, Florida USAOct 23, 2013

Hi C , thank you and sure I wouldn't mind that at all. If u want I will send it to your box if it allows files or u can hit up my private email and I can send it that way. Thank you again...Jesse

Odette67Penrith, Cumbria, England UKOct 23, 2013

Thank you Jesse,

You can send to my connectingsingles mail. I know for sure my daughter will pin your poem up on her notice board. :-)

fjamesj9701OPDunkinDonuts, Florida USAOct 24, 2013

Hey Bill, I am glad you appreciated this write and letting me know that it did it's job in a manner of speaking. I know how sad it is to lose a loved animal especially one who is faithfully loyal and to repeat it through the years. Thank you for your time my friend. Always glad to see you...Jesse

jonE2toneOrlando, Florida USAOct 24, 2013

Im almost pretty sure theres an App for that, good write

fjamesj9701OPDunkinDonuts, Florida USAOct 24, 2013

Probably is 2Tone probably is

Thank you...Jesse

RavensgoldPanchos Villas, Wexford IrelandOct 24, 2013

Hi Fj...As a doglover, I really enjoyed this one, very nicely put together...Cheers.

SundaySilenceLittle Gasparilla, Florida USAOct 24, 2013

Love it...love everything about it...and more.

fjamesj9701OPDunkinDonuts, Florida USAOct 24, 2013

Thank you Raven, I appreciate your time. Regards

...Jesse

orientalkoruGlenella, Queensland AustraliaOct 24, 2013

Jessy...thanks for sharing..I didn't see this in your earlier post...but Oh dear...it made me shed a tear. Right now I am staring in the eye of a dog...a dog I at first refused to acknowledge because it belongs to someone...who could take him away from us anytime...but each day like onion skin I began see layers of his emotions.....until somehow I began to see myself in him...loyal..longing for...wanting...craving for...always hoping for...love, affection, attention...and though he's not mine...my heart cries for him each day. You just might have inspired me...his name is Buck...my one true friend...

fjamesj9701OPDunkinDonuts, Florida USAOct 24, 2013

Thank you SS, I am glad you enjoyed this. I almost didn't repost but glad I did...Thank you again....Jesse

fjamesj9701OPDunkinDonuts, Florida USAOct 24, 2013

Thank you Oriental, I appreciate your time and that is a lovely story. My dog minnie was supposed to be just a temporary rescued dog in my custody until she was adopted. And the same layers started peeling for me too so very nice way you described that. She was kept in a small kennel for the first five months of her life in a garage and covered in a sheet. So she never knew how to react when I took her on her first walk, silly dog would bark at rocks, fire hydrants, one time even a flattened frog on the road. Quite comical but then again said. So I wrote this for her one night when she kept gnawing at my arm to play but I was too busy for her . Needless to say Im not too busy for her anymore. I take her on walks , rides, swimming, she is a lot of fun but just needed to discover each other...Thank you for sharing and replying...Jesse

Lively_WatersMooresville, North Carolina USANov 4, 2013

I so enjoyed your flow of words. But, my true "experience" of this write, was a grave sadness. As an animal lover, the torment I experience when slapped with this reality, is beyond what I am able to spiritually/emotionally handle. The impact, in fact, is so intense that I automatically go "numb." As such, the fact that someone else could make a point of writing about it was very rewarding. Thank you

fjamesj9701OPDunkinDonuts, Florida USANov 10, 2013

Thank you very much LW, I am an animal lover as well and it's disappointing how a life can be treated. Thank you again for your time and thoughts…Jesse

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