Invisible

Hello, are you there
Why should I talk to thin air
Why should you be a vapor in my mind
And all you give me is the barest essence of a good time
No picture I see
Not even you on the pc
Looking back at me
What with Skype....
And facebook
I can't even get a look
Yet you say you love me
And very interested
You seem to be
I gave you smiles,
And kind words
But only your wiles
I got in return
Be gone from me
Yes you, leave me be
It is over before it began
You are history.
~ ~ ~ ~ ~
Posted: Nov 2013
About this poem:
those folks with no pics who is forever promising one and those who put a pic but you get nothing else and you wonder if they are even human....

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fjamesj9701
Enjoyable read and strong, then I thought to myself hey, I'm one of theses guys without a face , but I know anyone who wants to see I would show. I admire you strength and how you spell it out in your poetry. Good stuff ...Jessewine
darkhorse555
so true diana it seems pointless without a visual picture beautifully penned piece angel
Ravensgold
Well said Diana,...we need that mental picturecool Good writewine Anthony.
Redex
I agree and liked the way you worded a poem around this.teddybear
Poetnumber1
That's not love Diana. I'm glad you recognized it before you became attached to a person behind a masked. Good write.hug
Odette67
Excellent Diana, you speak for many of us, I wonder too if these people are human. hug purple heart
diana_1
many thanks Odette, exactly...teddybear

Redex... yes isn't it just so unfair? Thanks for your visit...

Poet#1 definitely!

Ahh friend Jesse.... I see you do not worry.... I see you in your creation, in your words....

Darkhorse, thank you kindly dear friend...

Yes Raven... thank you

teddybear teddybear
Spartacus2012
Hey Diana,
One has to keep it real...Nice write..

Kenrose
diana_1
Thank you Ken .....so much for your visit.teddybear
soulgoddess
Nice work there! I could only wonder if they are shy about their appearances or it's due to their lack of English words that they always copy and paste the same message when you reply them.
Have a wonderful day regardless!
danceline
diana_1
thank you soul goddess.... true..
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