He stays in the darkness where it's safe, He stands across the road against a twisted old tree. His hood of the cape that flows around him covers his face. He watches people walk by and most don't see him, but they walk on the other side anyway.
She is lost in thought and stands looking out into the night. She noticed a shadow move and the image of the Dark Man comes to life. She should be afraid, she should turn and run, shouldn't she? She finds herself walking up to the Dark stranger, lifts her hand to his face and strokes his cheek, she looks into pools of light that see so deep inside her soul. She takes his hand and follows where he goes without question. Her soul is content for it knew that it had found the other half of what she has been looking for it seemed like forever.
looking sometimes feels like looking forever nice piece i really enjoyed
ladyjewelOPDurban, KwaZulu-Natal South AfricaMay 3, 2013
Smiles softly, mmm sometimes when you are not looking love finds you, it carms you and it shows you how much you can be connected to another soul, and it makes you happy
Hi, ladyjewel, Whether found in darkness or in light, it is good when Her soul is content for it knew that it had found the other half of what she has been looking for... Fortunate is the person who can recognize it when it comes into view.
ladyjewelOPDurban, KwaZulu-Natal South AfricaMay 9, 2013
gnj4u, thank you
Yes i found a unique and true kind of love, and i will always be happy my Dark man came into my life
FellsmanLake District, Cumbria, England UKMay 9, 2013
Hi ladyjewel
The hooded figure which you portray so vividly seems to almost be a Heathcliff type figure in the first half of your poem. Of course, Emily Bronté's anti-hero is a troubled character who meets with a sticky end - but happily, your creation appears destined for a much more agreeable outcome in life.
LadyJ. Now I know you wrote A good poem on your Darkman.
She noticed a Shadow move and the image of Dark man comes to life.
Very nice.
rapturecapturekerry, Kerry IrelandMay 9, 2013
Hi Ladyjewel
Mystery and romance I love it...Great write... Thank you for sharing
ArteeeChristchurch, Canterbury New ZealandMay 13, 2013
Her soul is content for it knew that it had found the other half of what she has been looking for it seemed like forever. She was home... She was and is His Lady!! So simply beautiful! Love Love Love.. two souls connecting, contentment bliss home!! Thank you for sharing ladyjewel
It is funny how the sister to the sun and the brother of the storm can come together as one in Soul to Soul eternal. You know me oh so well my love. Take my hand, Heaven awaits us.
ladyjewelOPDurban, KwaZulu-Natal South AfricaMay 13, 2013
thank you Fellsman, yes i also love happy endings:-) Rapture mmm i am happy:-) timotie my sweet friend Arteee, thank you so much, i am so blessed
My dark man you know me as much as i know you, from before time
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She was home...
She was and is His Lady..
Thank you my sweet friends xox
Whether found in darkness or in light, it is good when Her soul is content for it knew that it had found the other half of what she has been looking for... Fortunate is the person who can recognize it when it comes into view.
Yes i found a unique and true kind of love, and i will always be happy my Dark man came into my life
The hooded figure which you portray so vividly seems to almost be a Heathcliff type figure in the first half of your poem. Of course, Emily Bronté's anti-hero is a troubled character who meets with a sticky end - but happily, your creation appears destined for a much more agreeable outcome in life.
I just love a happy ending... A fine write.
Bill
Now I know you wrote
A good poem on your Darkman.
She noticed a Shadow move and the image of Dark man comes to life.
Very nice.
Mystery and romance I love it...Great write...
Thank you for sharing
She was home... She was and is His Lady!!
So simply beautiful!
Love Love Love.. two souls connecting, contentment bliss home!!
Thank you for sharing ladyjewel
Rapture mmm i am happy:-)
timotie my sweet friend
Arteee, thank you so much, i am so blessed
My dark man you know me as much as i know you, from before time
Your Dark man is a
Lucky Peson.
Good Wishes for Both.