Shades of Blue part 2

Old Jims eyes take on a watery glaze
As he continues to relive those far off days
On that long weekend
Up from the sticks
All tooled up for fun and frolics.
He downs another glass
As he slowly turns that old photograph
To reveal,..a cute girl in boots and a mini
Clinging to a longhaired guy,
All bashful and skinny
With a bunch of white carnations in hand
That she bought for him..
From a city centre flower stand
Just for a bit of fun,
Just for devilment,
Just to revel in his embarrassment.
Old Jim lights a smoke and smiles
Rolling back the miles
As he recalls that dreaded bouquet
And how she made him carry it around all day
As proof of his love...she said
As if proof were needed..
Old Jim shakes his head and lets out a sigh
Had he the chance now,
He would carry it to Egypt.
As Jim pours again,he begins to hum..
That old Mary Hopkin song
Those were the days my friend..
We thought theyd never end...
As he recalls Sue scouring the
Record stores for that song,..she so adored.
And oh, how she shimmied and posed
Like a true centrefold
Still managing to look so pretty
In the rain and the cold
As their photograph was taken
By the man on the bridge
While endeavouring to dodge the rush hour carnage
Afterwards,...Sue skipped along..
Happily chewing her juicyfruit gum,
Stopping once, to give coins to a begger
Yes, life was grand, it couldn't get much better
They had the freedom of the city
There was so much to see,
And like two kids in a sweet shop,
They rubbed their hands with glee....
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Posted: Nov 2013
About this poem:
Part 2 of this 3 part trip down memory lane......

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Comments (14)

Odette67
Oh R.G, I just love these trips down memory lane reminds me so much of my youth, even down to the chewing gum.thumbs up hug purple heart
gnj4u
Hi, Ravensgold,
...that dreaded bouquet...Had he the chance now, He would carry it to Egypt... and so the journey down memory lane continues in Shades of Blue. Again, well-painted with the poet's words. And like two kids in a sweet shop, They rubbed their hands with glee.... as do Readers in anticipation of part 3.
darkhorse555
really delightfully beautifully penned piece angel
diana_1
I enjoy reading your poems, they are so insightful I find.... please keep on going... about this one I can't wait to get Part 3... love part 1 and 2....
bouquet
hariksna
Elegance written all over the write.....violin musical....some times, while you read some poems you feel a music inside...this is one such write...thanks...
Serenity4two
well done again A - I look forward to part 3 hug wine
Ravensgold
Odette, Thank you once again for your great comments on this piece, I am glad you are enjoying this little tripwave
Thanks againhandshake Anthony.
Ravensgold
GNJ,I very much appreciate your comments , It is always great to receive them. Thank you very muchwave handshake Anthony.
Ravensgold
Many Thanks DH,I am much obliged...Thanks again..cheersbeer Anthony.
Ravensgold
Hi Diana, Thank you so much for your kind comments, I am glad you are enjoying this piece and part 3 will be along shortlywave wine handshake Anthony
Ravensgold
Hariksna,...Nice to meet you and thanks for the great comments,I am delighted to receive themhandshake Anthony.
Ravensgold
Thank you Serenity for your nice comments, they are much appreciatedhug wave Anthony
Poetnumber1
Very well done Anthony. Sublime portrayal of past memories that I find most refreshing to read every time from you. I await your next submission. cheers
Ravensgold
Poetnumber1,..Thank you very much for your kind words,they are much appreciatedhandshake wave
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