Alone

Lucy stumbles back into, that little room
Tired worn and weary, all energy consumed
The horrors of the day are etched upon her face
As she slumps down at the table,her mind in a daze

Everything is as it was, nothings out of place
She feels his presence in every corner,in every space
The morning coffee cups still standing,in the gloom
The knives ,the forks,the plates,his silver sugar spoon
Shining,shining through that gloom.

Lucy tries to piece together ,their last conversation
Was it really about the weather? was there no indication
She picks up his old cashmere sweater and holds it tight
But then,the scent of his cologne,like dynamite
ignites the tears that flow
And she lets go
All the pain and misery it flows
Shes rocking,...rocking to and fro.

Oh how she wishes she had gone with him this morning
Oh how she wishes she could be with him now
But instead she finds herself deep in mourning
As she leaves this house of stone...alone

Lucy picks a bunch of wild forget-me-knots
And throws them towards the shore
But they don't go very far
And she thinks she hears an old familiar voice
Call her name,above the noise
Of the crashing surf
Then she dries another tear
And heads down towards the pier
To get the boat back to the mainland..

From somewhere a corncrake sings his evening song
Hes happy, now the storm is gone
But for Lucy it goes on and on and on...

Oh how she wishes she had gone with him this morning
Oh how she wishes she could be with him now
But instead she finds herself,deep in mourning
Now shes going home alone
Now shes going home alone..
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Posted: Oct 2013
About this poem:
This is part of a song I was writing about a real life tragedy that happened many years ago.

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Serenity4two
Knowing the background to this story ,
the words you have written are even more poignant ..
Beautifully written Raven --you should feel rightly proud of this - F wine
Ravensgold
Serenity,Thank you very much for the lovely comments.
I truly value them for the encouragement they give me.handshake wine
francie2013
thumbs up cheers
Ravensgold
Thanks Franciewine handshakevery nice of you!
andrew149
Hi Ravensgold, I very much enjoyed this read, I thought almost from the start that it might be a song and I wasn't disappointed. It is well written, makes a good poem too in my humble opinion, if you haven't finished it yet, I really hope that you will....and...Post it here of course so that we can read too....Thankyou for posting!...Andrew...cool
fjamesj9701
Hey this is good stuff, I enjoyed reading this even through the sadness you made a time.regards...Jessehandshake
Ravensgold
Hi Andrew,Nice to meet you. Thank you for your interest and your insightful comments and after reading some of your work, I value your imput very much.handshake beer
rapturecapture
Hi Ravensgold

I really enjoyed reading Alone, it drew me in from the beginning...
One wonders what happened, and why she did not go....so you leave the reader pondering!.
Thank you for sharing

Martina xxxhug angel wave
Ravensgold
Hi Martina,Nice to meet you.
I am glad you enjoyed this piece, and to answer your question...
This is based on a true story about a mysterious disappearance on one of the small islands off the Nth West coast about 80 years ago. There were many rumours, sightings etc...but it still remains a mystery to this day.Thanks again for your comments Martinawinehandshake Anthony.
ladyjewel
hug sounds like a wonderful song, love the emotion and mystery in thisteddybear
darkhorse555
an extremely beautiful piece of writingangel
diana_1
beautiful... but for some reason I feel sad flower crying like I actually know lucy can see her in that little room... can see her by the shore... can see the despair in the slump of her shoulders.... oh raven, very well done.... thank you
Ravensgold
Jesse, Thank you very much for your kind comments on my piece,it is much appreciated...Thanks againwave handshake
Ravensgold
Lady, Thank you so much for your favourable comments on my piece.....I am so glad you enjoyed it....Regardswine handshake
Ravensgold
Darkhorse, Thanks for your great comments,much appreciated!handshake
Ravensgold
Diana,Thank you very much for your lovely comments on this piece.
I am glad you enjoyed it.,...regards Anthonywine handshake
shadow1950
brilliant write doing honour to the memory superb pen teddybear bouquet hug kiss wine
enigma2
Beautiful wording and sad wave
sundayrose1
Epic Anthony. Very moving. But shes still so all alone

Much like me. Im happier now. I'm growing out of it

Thanks for the read.

Phyllis
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