Beautiful Land

She lives in her own little fairytale land
full of colourful rainbows,
Its a beautiful land
Chasing the butterflies, laughing with glee
So wild and untamed, in a land so free
Yes, she lives in a beautiful fairytale land
Where the sun always shines through the rain
Theres candy stripe trees with chocolate leaves
And mountains of icecream on peppermint streams
Yes, its a beautiful land
A beautiful land.
As she smiles in her sleep at night
Of what does she dream
Are there white fluffy kittens or caramel creams
Just as long as that little light shines oer the bed
There are no worrys and cares in that pretty head
For shes lost in her beautiful fairytale land
Lost in her beautiful land,
Her beautiful land.
Oh its beautiful,when your just two years old
So much to do and everythings so new
You light up my life with your hair of gold
And that's why,.. these words are for you
As you run through your beautiful fairytale land
Just remember that I love you
~ ~ ~ ~ ~
Posted: Oct 2013
About this poem:
This is part of a song I wrote as I watched my then two year old daughter skipping through the long grass some twenty six years ago...I am glad to say that she (as an artist) still lives in that fairytale land where anything is possible.

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Serenity4two
You have described and captured that moment vividly in this song/poem Raven --for a loving parent , life is made up of special moments like these ...
This is a beautiful dedication to one of your daughters -the memory of which you have worded so elegantly here .
warm regards -Fiona hug wine
morgen90210
lovely and precious memory my friend
thank you for sharing
one day i get married and have a princess just like you. . . give her a hug for me. . . for both!
Redex
I could almost hear the tune when reading this lovely tribute to your daughter just knew it was a song before reaching the end.
Hope you have sung it to her.teddybear
Ravensgold
Hi Fiona,Hope you are well! So glad you enjoyed this piece as your comments are greatly welcomed.Thanks once again for your time hug wave
Ravensgold
Hi Morgan, Thanks for the great comments and I hope you get to experience these feelings one dayhandshake wave
fjamesj9701
Excellent piece and descriptive with glee,relly enjoys your writes wouldnt mind to hear the music behind them. Most of my postings here are once part of a song I screamed or sang laugh but all in all great stuff...Jessebeer
darkhorse555
sing of the page beautifulangel
socrates44online today!
O the joy of childhood innocence that you have painted so beautifully! You are a true artist. Lovely Write!
Ravensgold
Hi Redex, Thank you for your great comments on this piece, they are most welcome,....and yes, I have played it to herlaugh ...regardshandshake wave
Ravensgold
Hi Darkhorse, Thanks for your comment on this piece. much obliged.Cheersbeer handshake
Ravensgold
Thank you Socrates for your very kind words and comments on this peace,It is much appreciated.....Regards Anthony handshake
ladyjewel
hug so precious a childs mind, and its lovely when a Dad is able to see inside the mind of his child and capture it so beautifullywine kiss

am glad she still has some magicbouquet
Ravensgold
Hi FJ,...Thanks for your great comments,i very much appreciate it
and like yourself,most of my stuff also starts off in song form also.cheersbeer wave
Ravensgold
LJ, Thank you for the very kind words on this piece, I am glad you enjoyed it....Regards Anthonyhandshake wine
Odette67
You light up my life with your hair of gold
And that's why,.. these words are for you
As you run through your beautiful fairytale land
Just remember that I love you

What a beautiful poem. I remember the pleasure I would derive from watching my girls sleep when they were babies. hug purple heart
Ravensgold
Odette, Thank you very much for your lovely comments on this piece, they are much appreciatedwine handshake
diana_1
definitely the place to be that fairytale land, so beautiful and bright is the picture your words have painted....cheering
beautifulyou
Anthony, this is beyond sweet;
it's always a lovely thing to see and hear a father's love for his daughter,
thanks for bringing this to us purple heart
Ravensgold
Beautifulyou, Thank you very much for your kind comments on this song/poem It is really appreciated....regards Anthony handshake hug wave
sundayrose1
Just beaautiful Raven. Such a tribute to your beautiful daughter.

SRbouquet
Ravensgold
Sundayrose,I much appreciate your lovely comments on this song/poem Thank you!..I cant believe it is all of 26 years that I sat on a rock with my guitar and wrote these words as my little daughter ran through the long grass..bouquet handshake wave
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