this heart is your pillow all soft embracing tenderness fuzzy within kisses touching heartstrings plays on beautiful feelings like a harp
emotions sing out the soul flies with you in a beautiful song dancing in clouds dreaming on number nine wings of an angel chants your name
the second heartbeat smiling inwardly floating warm in paradise trumpets sound your hands hold softly within this world
i lay my head upon your chest listening to one beautiful heart the other half of one love washing away darkness
in baptism of the sun from a world in tears rejoicing sings within happiness falling from a smiling moon stars twinkle upon the night sky shines one treasure gem
rising in warmth love in first light queen of the morning crowning you with morning dew a royal beauty
Simply stunning Liam Your romantic poetry is a pure joy -F
Odette67Penrith, Cumbria, England UKNov 10, 2013
i lay my head upon your chest listening to one beautiful heart the other half of one love washing away darkness
There is so much beauty in your poems Liam, this is another beauty from you.
NirvanagirlMayo, IrelandNov 10, 2013
I like simplicity but the thinking behind each verse of your poetry must have took some time. You deserve to be in the poetry corner,I'm only a newbie, I think poetry is going to help me here
Hi Liam, one starts to run out of superlatives my friend. Another fine romantic piece from yourself. I knew the next words before they came upon the page. No, I'm not psychic, I've read it before. Your words come forth from Love's eternal well wrapped in colours so bright. Your work always has that gentle flow, they can virtually be sung off the page. One more little gem to add to your collection. You are indeed rich in your Loving feelings now my friend. Forever let the rose bloom within your heart. Have a good day. Catch you later. Your Friend always....MIKE.
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Your romantic poetry is a pure joy -F
my head
upon your chest
listening to one
beautiful heart
the other half
of one love
washing away darkness
There is so much beauty in your poems Liam, this is another beauty from you.
the morning
crowning you
with morning dew
a royal beauty
You are the king of love and passion Liam, beautiful poem as ever from your soul.
Some good romantic stuff my friend..
Ken
I agree with Lady Odette, that you are definitely the King of Love and Passion
rob
of one love
washing away darkness
Beautiful Liam, I can feel this poem in my heart
This one was so romantic, nice and made it with a very original style.
I enjoyed it very much.
Stell