Money, family and steady job, there was a time when he had it all But drugs took over and he lost the lot, he lost his way, such a long way to fall Now he’s got nothing and the local park is where he calls home Just a bottle of cider and he’s drinking it all alone Slipped from society and fallen from grace Pain and anxiety Written on his face A victim of his life He made a wrong choice Just a shadow of a man without a voice When people see him they cross the street Afraid to let their glances meet Embarrassed he might ask for change Or shout out something they find strange He lives for today as tomorrows too far It may as well be a dark distant star He can’t remember the sweet smell of soap And the love of his life is his dog on a rope Just an empty man with an empty can Sitting by whilst his life get’s flushed down the pan Winter is coming, the rain and the frost If he can’t find shelter then all may be lost And when he has died nobody will care No-one will notice he’s no longer there
KonigsbergJurassic Park (Site B), Nova Scotia CanadaDec 4, 2009
I had to sign in for this gem poem.
It is so professionally written, Cookiemonster. You need to offer as a song lyrics.
It is marvelous! THANK YOU
cookiemonster67OPGravesend, Kent, England UKDec 4, 2009
Thanks kon, Glad you liked it. I do actually write songs as well (some end up as poems and vice-versa). Don't think you'll be hearing them in the pop charts though
KonigsbergJurassic Park (Site B), Nova Scotia CanadaDec 4, 2009
It doesn't belong to a pop chart ... it is too exclusive.
It reminds me of Jim Morison and Hendrix music art. Even the same rhythmical bit. Something like "Riders on the storm"
Have fun with writing, you are good
cookiemonster67OPGravesend, Kent, England UKDec 4, 2009
Thanks, and i'll send you a signed copy of my album if i ever record it
jerseygirl49Petersburg, Virginia USADec 5, 2009
There is too much to be said about this portrayal,of so many real lives.How you paint the picture is like an artist.Simply wonderfull,really, your best yet i think!!
cookiemonster67OPGravesend, Kent, England UKDec 5, 2009
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It is so professionally written, Cookiemonster. You need to offer as a song lyrics.
It is marvelous! THANK YOU
It reminds me of Jim Morison and Hendrix music art.
Even the same rhythmical bit. Something like "Riders on the storm"
Have fun with writing, you are good
I think we have all experienced this sight.
You've brought more meaning to it.