Wind 14 word challenge

by IvoryPetalsArima, Borough of Arima, Trinidad and Tobago

Nov 2013 511 Views 7 comments

Wind: 14 word challenge

Author: IvoryPetals

Wind.
God’s breath can be violent or kind.
With chains you can never bind.

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Posted: Nov 2013

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mimzy333unknown, Washington USANov 21, 2013

better then mine love this

niah9Auckland, New ZealandNov 21, 2013

beautiful Ivory petals.....Kathy

sundayrose1san francisco, California USANov 21, 2013

So incredibly compelling and so true IP.

thanks so much. speak volumes and power.

SR

IvoryPetalsOPArima, Borough of Arima Trinidad and TobagoNov 22, 2013

ty! i saw the challenge and took a whack at it! dont know if i did any good, but thats my attempt! i dont come online here that often but i hope to see more challenges out there. I love reading the poetry here, i'm inspired by so many of the poets here. you all make me feel like a grain of sand looking at the ocean at times. i hope to be on par with you all, the ones i call my peers.