trust game

mimzy333

by mimzy333unknown, Washington, USA

Nov 2013 452 Views 11 comments

the trust game

Author: mimzy333

Trust me you say? I trust you with my life. Do this for me you say,make your self vonerable to my way,yet why should I? You want my total vonerability?, yet you cant give me yours. Love is built on trust, what a joke! Trust is earned through deeds unbroken. You say trust me,yet you don't, why continue this silly game?, when played nothing is gained,only sarrow and broken hearts remain.

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Posted: Nov 2013

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just thinking how internet dating seem to be built on blind trust,yet no one truly can trust any one thanks to all the scammers. If a man truly wants my trust then he must show himself in person to me first. I have yet to meet any of the so called romancers

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Comments (11)

sundayrose1

sundayrose1san francisco, California USANov 26, 2013

My friend, how true. Every word is oozing with nothing but the truth and even after you meet them? Whoa...the truth is even more elusive...But it does happen true love my friend..so please be patient and be aware...I pray for you and all of us who are so vulnerable to this mind games...

Take care always.

SR

darkhorse555

darkhorse555donegal, Donegal IrelandNov 26, 2013

trust has to be earned it will come in time beautifully drawn piece god bless

mimzy333

mimzy333OPunknown, Washington USANov 26, 2013

thank you SR my most trusted and truest friend.

shadow1950

shadow1950taunton, Somerset, England UKNov 26, 2013

Cameal sore feeling in this powerful write without trust one is left with nothing well written

mimzy333

mimzy333OPunknown, Washington USANov 26, 2013

thank you liam for the comment

mimzy333

mimzy333OPunknown, Washington USANov 27, 2013

thankyou shadow..some times i get so frustrated with things.

minkybee

minkybeebrisbane, Queensland AustraliaJan 13, 2014

Too true ... Xxxxxxxx thanks for sharing xxxx

mimzy333

mimzy333OPunknown, Washington USAJan 14, 2014

thankyou rapture for your comment

mimzy333

mimzy333OPunknown, Washington USAJan 14, 2014

thank you minkey for your comment and welcome to our corner.

shadow1950

shadow1950taunton, Somerset, England UKJan 14, 2014

wise words Cameal less said about on-line dating the better lol heard so many disaster stories from younger friends. fine pen

mimzy333

mimzy333OPunknown, Washington USAJan 14, 2014

lol so true linda as most of my friends just call web dateing as nothing more then a bunch of internet loosers...guess that makes me ? lol

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