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by mimzy333unknown, Washington, USA

Jan 2014 510 Views 18 comments

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Author: mimzy333

Melted heart spread so thin holds memories of wilted roses within. Renaissance love of golded arrow holding retaliatory torture of loves call,only to receve a silver tip after all.

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Posted: Jan 2014

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Comments (18)

TAR_734

TAR_734unknown, Missouri USAJan 28, 2014

mimzy333,
This is one of your shorter poems but,
"Melted heart spread so thin holds memories of wilted roses within" speaks volumes!...Poignantly expressed

Lovely, Dear Mimzy

Robert

sundayrose1

sundayrose1san francisco, California USAJan 28, 2014

This is very melancholic yet very well expressed my dear.

Take care
SR

Angel04

Angel04gympie, Queensland AustraliaJan 28, 2014

Very deep for me to read mimzy,
simply beautiful

beautifulyou

beautifulyouNew York, USAJan 28, 2014

that is one strong opening mimzy,
'Melted heart spread so thin holds memories of wilted roses within.'
very very good

mimzy333

mimzy333OPunknown, Washington USAJan 29, 2014

thank you robert for you insightive comment.

mimzy333

mimzy333OPunknown, Washington USAJan 29, 2014

thank you my dearest friend SR for your comment...just been depressed lately and cant seem to shake it.

txbreeze134

txbreeze134Kilgore, Texas USAJan 29, 2014

I thought this poem was very good.

mimzy333

mimzy333OPunknown, Washington USAJan 29, 2014

thank you angle for your comment

darkhorse555

darkhorse555donegal, Donegal IrelandJan 29, 2014

deep beautifully penned dear friend

Poetnumber1

Poetnumber1St James, Port of Spain Trinidad and TobagoJan 29, 2014

Very beautiful lines Cameal. Liked the first one especially.

mimzy333

mimzy333OPunknown, Washington USAJan 29, 2014

thank you beautyfulyou for your comment

mimzy333

mimzy333OPunknown, Washington USAJan 29, 2014

thank you texbreez for your comment

mimzy333

mimzy333OPunknown, Washington USAJan 29, 2014

thank you for the comment liam

mimzy333

mimzy333OPunknown, Washington USAJan 29, 2014

thankyou dear poet #1 for the comment...nice to see you agian.

Spartacus2012

Spartacus2012Biloxi, Mississippi USAJan 29, 2014

Nice write Cameal..

Ken

mimzy333

mimzy333OPunknown, Washington USAJan 30, 2014

thank you ken for your comment

niah9

niah9Auckland, New ZealandJan 30, 2014

when limited words explain in full details....of love.....lovely Mimzy....Kathy

mimzy333

mimzy333OPunknown, Washington USAJan 31, 2014

thank you niah for the lovely comment

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