This world of hope and dreams,locked away behind steel laden walls never to be. Fake kisses with a goal,hiding behind a canopy of lies. Soulless dreams in a puritanical fantasy, this is what virtual love has become to me.
my friend, having experienced some negative side of this virtual world must not over rule your chances on having a good possibility. After all, you and I are friends and will be here even as we sometimes feel abandoned.
A most powerful write my friend.
mimzy333OPunknown, Washington USAJul 9, 2015
thank you Phyllis for your comment
Poetnumber1St James, Port of Spain Trinidad and TobagoJul 11, 2015
I can suucintly relate to this dear Mimzy especially the second line.I loved this my friend. Always
Mims, my friend...You can bring the real to this world of virtual love...all may seem fake except it isn't as long as you remain true. Keep your heart true....the reward is there waiting.... .... Harriett
beautifulyouNew York, USAJul 11, 2015
it's good to see you mimzy. i hope other possibilities other than the virtual open up for you
mimzy333OPunknown, Washington USAJul 13, 2015
thank you dear poet#1, I knew you would relate with this hope some day all will change but I'm not seeing it yet
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A most powerful write my friend.
i hope other possibilities other than the virtual open up for you