Like a pretty ghost you tempt with fragrence, while lurking in dreamy shadows of vivid colors. Your nector draws bees on intrepid wing, seeking redemption from the long winters nap. You simbolize spring with brilliance of allureing beauty.
I love flowers. There is an article on special flowers in my National Geographic.
mimzy333OPunknown, Washington USAFeb 22, 2014
thankyou red for the sweet comment
StedanLiverpool, Merseyside, England UKFeb 22, 2014
I can imagine the bees waiting for that signal to resurrect from winters sleep to collect the sweet nectar that flowers provide. Enjoyed very much mimzy333 thank you.
HEY!...Where is the comment I posted yesterday on this poem!???!!! Anyway... Mimzy, this is a lovely celebration of nature's promise of Spring. Like a "Haiku, in Free Verse". Beautiful Write, my dear Mimzy! Robert
mimzy333OPunknown, Washington USAFeb 23, 2014
thank you robert, humm maybe I have invented a new style of poetry its just the way I wright. I also have had several poems publish over the years and the publishers have commented on my style of wrighting, about 8yrs I was invited to the poetry festavl in england like that was ever going to happen. I have a friend JD who writes songs and gets them published and he kept pestering me to go but i simply grinned and asked him if he was going to pay for the plane tickit.
niah9Auckland, New ZealandFeb 23, 2014
truly beautiful and inspiring Mimzy...loved it...Kathy...
Like a pretty ghost you tempt with fragrance, while lurking in dreamy shadows of vivid colors. Your nector draws bees on intrepid wing, seeking redemption from the long winters nap. You symbolize spring with brilliance of alluring beauty.
Just so beautiful and so redeeming and so positive my dear..Love it so much..
LJ
Poetnumber1St James, Port of Spain Trinidad and TobagoFeb 24, 2014
Lovely write Cameal, I can visualize everything succinctly here. Enjoyed the read.
mimzy333OPunknown, Washington USAFeb 24, 2014
thank you Niah for the lovely comment
mimzy333OPunknown, Washington USAFeb 24, 2014
thankyou my dearest friend LJ for the wonderfull comment
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Nice poem.......Mick
Enjoyed very much mimzy333 thank you.
Anyway...
Mimzy, this is a lovely celebration of nature's promise of Spring. Like a "Haiku, in Free Verse".
Beautiful Write, my dear Mimzy!
Robert
Just so beautiful and so redeeming and so positive my dear..Love it so much..
LJ
Ken
i like.. very nice hon
just in time for spring