river of dreams

by mimzy333unknown, Washington, USA

Dec 2013 399 Views 9 comments

river of dreams

In my dreams there is a place worth knowing,where the river is flowing. A place of magic,a sea of love, where nothing clouds the sun. Where masterpieces in the making lets me fly. Where broken loves rapid water falls fills murkey pools littered with shards of past loves calls. when life fills my heart with agoney of dispair to be rescued by dreams flowing rivers where sunsets are,into the sea of love.

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Posted: Dec 2013

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trurorobAlicante, Valencia SpainDec 12, 2013

This is better than it appears (Maybe because of the layout). But I enjoyed the read in the search of love.
Rob

mimzy333OPunknown, Washington USADec 12, 2013

thank you rob ...i think? lol thansk for the comment

steve1223adelaide, South Australia AustraliaDec 12, 2013

You never know where you end up following your river of dreams

darkhorse555donegal, Donegal IrelandDec 12, 2013

an ocean of memories flows beautifully penned dear friend

mimzy333OPunknown, Washington USADec 12, 2013

thanks steve for the comment

sundayrose1san francisco, California USADec 12, 2013

"littered with shards of past loves calls." Very deep my friend. Speaks volumes of frustration and yes may it flow fast and be gone.

That is what I say....

Take care and we should have become wiser, yes?

Love you my friend..

SR

mimzy333OPunknown, Washington USADec 12, 2013

thank you leim for the comment.

mimzy333OPunknown, Washington USADec 13, 2013

my dear SR you know me too well thank you for the comment

ladyjewelDurban, KwaZulu-Natal South AfricaDec 22, 2013

beautiful lady, a river always washes clean the sand and stones and makes them shine in a new light, may your river be full of magic and dreams coming true

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