In my attempts to master my actions, I get attatched to passions, Interactions I know will only blacken my soul, While the world seems whole, I search for my slice, Trying to surmise the meaning of life, In my mind I'm growing short on time, I must find rest on this endless quest of mine, Yes find rest...or lay down die and accept death...
I can relate to this a lot Madtat: "While the world seems whole, I search for my slice, Trying to surmise the meaning of life, In my mind I'm growing short on time,"
very beautifully crafted dear friend excellent piece
Odette67Penrith, Cumbria, England UKFeb 3, 2014
Your poetry touches the dark side of life, my kind of poetry, dark poetry is my forte. Hence the flattery.
Poetnumber1St James, Port of Spain Trinidad and TobagoFeb 3, 2014
''In my mind I'm growing short on time'' depicts how I feel at times, and at best ''Trying to surmise the meaning of life. Its a good write Madtat, thanks for these floating thoughts champ.
enigma2Melbourne, Victoria AustraliaFeb 3, 2014
I particularly like;" Trying to surmise the meaning of life, In my mind I'm growing short on time, I must find rest on this endless quest of mine"
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Rob
While the world seems whole,
I search for my slice,
"While the world seems whole,
I search for my slice,
Trying to surmise the meaning of life,
In my mind I'm growing short on time,"
In my mind I'm growing short on time,
I must find rest on this endless quest of mine"