musings

In my attempts to master my actions,
I get attatched to passions,
Interactions I know will only blacken my soul,
While the world seems whole,
I search for my slice,
Trying to surmise the meaning of life,
In my mind I'm growing short on time,
I must find rest on this endless quest of mine,
Yes find rest...or lay down die and accept death...
~ ~ ~ ~ ~
Posted: Feb 2014
About this poem:
Just stuff floating around in my head

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Comments (17)

trurorob
Nice one Madtat, particulary like these two lines.
Rob

While the world seems whole,
I search for my slice,
orientalkoru
I can relate to this a lot Madtat:
"While the world seems whole,
I search for my slice,
Trying to surmise the meaning of life,
In my mind I'm growing short on time,"
madtat29
yall are the greatest...mad lovehug
madtat29
Thanks rob...its a n incredible journey no?... glad you liked the readdrinking
madtat29
Ty Odette....your comments are always way too flattering...blushing wine
madtat29
Hiya Phyllis..ty for the love and support...I'm always ok...just what comes out ya know?Thanks for readin and commenting .always appreciatedbouquet
madtat29
Ty ty Oriental..glad you stopped in and read my little poem...wine
darkhorse555
very beautifully crafted dear friend excellent pieceangel cheers
Odette67
Your poetry touches the dark side of life, my kind of poetry, dark poetry is my forte. Hence the flattery. laugh purple heart
Poetnumber1
''In my mind I'm growing short on time'' depicts how I feel at times, and at best ''Trying to surmise the meaning of life. Its a good write Madtat, thanks for these floating thoughts champ.
enigma2
I particularly like;" Trying to surmise the meaning of life,
In my mind I'm growing short on time,
I must find rest on this endless quest of mine" thumbs up
madtat29
Suup Dh..thanks brocheers
madtat29
Lol Odette..i must warn you young lady I am susseptible to flattery...purple heart
madtat29
Thanks poet...float like a butterfly...lol
madtat29
Thank you enigma...glad you stoped by and commented..wine
Redex
I enjoyed reading your musing never give up searching for that slicepeace
madtat29
Hiya Red...ty ty...wine
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