The old days

Sitting here reflecting on days gone by,
I wonder what it would be like had we met back then?
Back then when a letter meant so much than now,
When an SMS or MMS couldn't explain time fly..

I would stare into your eyes with telephatic crush:
Through your deep blue windows rite down into your soul,
Embracing your spirit as we holding hands,
Down a path in a garden much like Adam and Eve:
Appreciating the beauty without no rush..

Each moment we'd find was to spend more time,
Holding hands, running wild mold your spirit with mine.
Growing old, just us two watching our children care for theirs.
Telling stories, have all wonder how great it can be.
Life with someone, sent from heaven, what a blessing to me...
~ ~ ~ ~ ~
Posted: Feb 2014

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Mizzy4
Glad to see you embrace it Mark.......
Very lucky......maybe even rare!
Nice write.........Mick.
cheers
sundayrose1
Very good remembering and incorporating the cyber difference back then? Can you imagine it takes a month before you can get an answer to your letter, that is if you get lucky? and the Post office didn't lost it or just plain you didn't get to be lucky for a reply?

Hmmmnn what a change Mark. the end sounds very nostalgic and it is good. If only.

Very nice read Mark.

Thanks for the sharehandshake bouquet
Mark7791
Thankyou very much for your read guys,It is always appreciated when your writing is accepted...
TAR_734
The old day...I remember them wellangel
Very nostalgic for me Mark7791.
Very nice feel and flow to this piece.
Happy Valentine's Day, fellow Poet!
Roberthug
cheers
happy valentines day
Mark7791
Thankyou for reading hope you all had a fab Valentines daypeace handshake tks Rob
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