The man she really wants won't be found in some scribbled poem He won't dial her number as she sobs by a late night phone For she knows that he is born of magic which the wind cannot contain Only He understands her smiles and the sorrow of her rain She awaits for him to decend with sword and shield in hand She reasons her children will florish in a sweet and conquered land But she awakens to the kiss of her prince, yet it's to sad for words to tell For she lived her life as a devil And now she abides in Hell..
Hi, cafetwo2010, The man she really wants won't be found in some scribbled poem... Perhaps not hers, but a woman can hope, can't she? Of course, if one had to abide in Hell to find a prince, it isn't worth it. Thanks for sharing this rhymed verse and its emotional twist.
Odette67Penrith, Cumbria, England UKMar 7, 2014
You are back with a bang Jim, another fantastic poem.
AhyraAdelaide, South Australia AustraliaMar 7, 2014
Oh my, cafe2, love it
morgen90210singapore, Central Singapore SingaporeMar 7, 2014
heaven forbide. . . its a storyline tale fit for a classic dark vs light magic poem, .
Good one Sir Cafe...Maybe they're just hot flashes
cafetwo2010OPHarford county, Maryland USAMar 7, 2014
Ty gnj..I'm wondering what prince it was that awakened her to doom. Lol
cafetwo2010OPHarford county, Maryland USAMar 7, 2014
Ty Odette.. Thank you darling.
cafetwo2010OPHarford county, Maryland USAMar 7, 2014
Ty Ahyra.. Great that you are back with your unique poetry.
cafetwo2010OPHarford county, Maryland USAMar 7, 2014
Ty morgan.. We will both star in this great movie. Pick your roll. Lol
cafetwo2010OPHarford county, Maryland USAMar 7, 2014
Ty mimzy..I was born to tease the maidens..
cafetwo2010OPHarford county, Maryland USAMar 7, 2014
Ty rapture.. Be sure to check your prince's ID. lol.
cafetwo2010OPHarford county, Maryland USAMar 7, 2014
Ty madtat.. Some chicks are just to hot to handle. I'm suffering from first degree burns.
Poetnumber1St James, Port of Spain Trinidad and TobagoMar 8, 2014
This is excellent work here Cafetwo. I liked the rhyme scheme as well as the solid substance of your material. I thought you did a good job in drawing on the heartstrings with this one.
cafetwo2010OPHarford county, Maryland USAMar 8, 2014
Ty Poetnumber#1.. It's always fun to come up with an unanticipated ending and keep the rhyme in tact.
Comments (24)
Rob
Loved it. Hot kisses on the way
my ice cubes from the fridge. Bummer.
The man she really wants won't be found in some scribbled poem... Perhaps not hers, but a woman can hope, can't she? Of course, if one had to abide in Hell to find a prince, it isn't worth it. Thanks for sharing this rhymed verse and its emotional twist.
fit for a classic dark vs light magic poem, .
Another majestic write..
Thank you for sharing
Martina xxx
that awakened her to doom. Lol
your unique poetry.
movie. Pick your roll. Lol
prince's ID. lol.
to handle. I'm suffering from first degree
burns.
with an unanticipated ending and keep the
rhyme in tact.