Life

like a yatch
out in the ocean
on a glorious day
you can sail as slow or
as fast as you want
in anyway the wind blows
so don't forget
to take the time
to have a splash,
dive, jump and
just enjoy
the ride
while it lasts!
~ ~ ~ ~ ~
Posted: Mar 2014
About this poem:
the child in me...

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TAR_734
laugh rolling on the floor laughing professor Yeah Kathylaugh wave
but, as an old "Salt", I agree with Bette Davis, as I say, make sure you have a life preserver, "You're in for a bumpy ride"! hahahahahahahahahahalaugh banana head banger applause rolling on the floor laughing laugh
Really like this write...laugh popcorn
Robertbouquet
teddybear laugh rolling on the floor laughing

tip hat thanks rose elephant very happy
orientalkoru
Thanks Robert peace
This is one of the moments when you sit somewhere and you scribble instead of a paragraph you end up with words that often don't rhyme...a lazy write I call it...I'm not a poet...most of the times I have to think to be able to put words together...this is one of those times when I just scribble and don't care...
Angel04
This is beautiful, I can just see this in my mind,
what a great little poem, wish I was on the reef right now swimming with the fishieshug banana

Angiehug yay handshake angel
niah9
true Oriental....enjoy the journey, not just the event of getting from A to B.....great write as always....teddybear
Odette67
but don't forget
to take the time
to have a splash,
dive, jump and just
enjoy the ride!


Love it Ok,
we should all hang onto our inner child, no matter how old we are.hug purple heart bouquet
darkhorse555
very beautifully painted excellent piece dear friendangel wine
orientalkoru
Thanks Robert ... Wherever you are mate take care and thank you for the kind words you've given me...thumbs up God Bless angel
orientalkoru
Angel thank you dear... Hope you're all fine and dandy beautiful Angel... Take care always...teddybear gift bouquet wine
orientalkoru
Thanks Kathy... You are a lovely lady...teddybear bouquet wine
orientalkoru
Absolutely agree with you Chrissieteddybear teddybear bouquet wine thumbs up
orientalkoru
Thanks Liam mate much appreciated thumbs up
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