cruel potato

hello potato man
picking on me now
loveless in
the heart
how dare you
after attacking
my girlfriend
your pretty
sick if
you ask me

striking a cruel blow
just attacked me
for no reason
in your written words
on winged pegasus
dark horse
out of the garbage bin
throwing your horrible feelings
bruising me

horrid little man
with a brain
full of starch
get yourself
a personality
sounds like
your all mashed up

thank you for
the cruel comment
your just
a joke
in my eyes
to the world
who will see

what a narrow
minded person
you will never
be happy
just miserable
i see this
when i looked
upon your written words
~ ~ ~ ~ ~
Posted: Mar 2014

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Comments (11)

wayne34
Sounds like mr potato is all mashed up make him into chsmp mmm that would be nicecheers
wayne34
Who's picking on you my friendcheers
darkhorse555
you will see him on winged pegasus dark horse dear friend see what you think angel
Girlygirl196349
I feel you I really do!!! This write has made me feel a we bit better!!! I'm in shock im so confused . My heart hurts today yet to see this poem it describes all that I feel thanks from the bottom of my heart if you get a chance I would really like you to send me a copy of this pem.comfort doh handshake cheering angel
mcradloff
I hope this potato gets fryed, or mashed. Hope he sprouts up somewhere else but here.cheers bunny
zeeshanr
I enjoyed your poem thank you for sharing .hug teddybear
Sinclair_RHR
comfort heart wings thumbs up
darkhorse555
god bless u curlygirl hurt is an awful deep pain i can relate thank you for the wonderful comment thank you ever so much deeply appreciatedangel wine
darkhorse555
thank you mcd for the sprouting beautiful comment dear friend deeply appreciatedangel cheers
darkhorse555
zeezhar thank you for the wonderful comment deeply appreciatedangel wine
darkhorse555
robert thank you for the lovely comment deeply appreciatedangel cheers
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