oldest mystery

by darkhorse555Donegal, Ireland

Apr 2014 570 Views 24 comments

oldest mystery

like some
of the ancient mysteries
i just want
to be
everything to you

like the
hanging gardens
live in
your mind forever
the ancient
mystery love

you are
one of
the seven wonders
once i saw you
i loved
what i saw

like a garden
filled with fruit
endless love
a fruit
that fills
you forever
the oldest
mystery love

~ ~ ~ ~ ~

Posted: Apr 2014

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Girlygirl196349Fullerton, California USAApr 15, 2014

Liam you write the most beautifully poetry. I whis you would try to get yourself into a healthier state it really saddens me when I read your poetry

darkhorse555OPdonegal, Donegal IrelandApr 16, 2014

laura love is my dream i have so much inside i write how i feel wonderful heartfelt comment dear friend deeply appreciated

vyoletaArkaroola, South Australia AustraliaApr 16, 2014

I totally agree with you. Love is one of the oldest and most mysterious things in this world. And one of the best things, too, we have on our disposal. Good poem, thanks.

Mizzy4Navan, Meath IrelandApr 16, 2014

Very nicely penned Liam !
Mick.

darkhorse555OPdonegal, Donegal IrelandApr 16, 2014

VYOLATE thank you for the truly wonderful comment heartfelt beautiful deeply appreciated

orientalkoruGlenella, Queensland AustraliaApr 16, 2014

Above all things...the greatest of all these is Love...check this link when you have time my friend...

http://www.washingtonpost.com/lifestyle/style/love-remains-the-mystery-of-life/2012/02/13/gIQAvYypBR_story.html

darkhorse555OPdonegal, Donegal IrelandApr 16, 2014

wonderful comment mick dear friend heartfelt beautiful deeply appreciated

Girlygirl196349Fullerton, California USAApr 16, 2014

My apologies to you Liam

Spartacus2012Biloxi, Mississippi USAApr 16, 2014

Good stuff Liam..To be loved by someone you love can be everything..

Ken

fjamesj9701DunkinDonuts, Florida USAApr 16, 2014

Really good stuff here my friend. you've come into form my friend.. Regards…Jesse

SnowCoveredMusefarmington, Maine USAApr 26, 2014

I have always heard a poet had to be in love to write...You my friend write to breathe, great job

SAS

darkhorse555OPdonegal, Donegal IrelandApr 26, 2014

inspiring wonderful comment orient beautiful friends deeply appreciated thank you ever so kindly

darkhorse555OPdonegal, Donegal IrelandApr 26, 2014

laura no need to be sorry dear friend i fully understand loves light inside will forever shine it was his light of love that cured me so love holds the highest position

darkhorse555OPdonegal, Donegal IrelandMay 25, 2014

thank you ken for the beautiful comment deeply appreciated

darkhorse555OPdonegal, Donegal IrelandMay 25, 2014

jesse thank you dear friend for the wonderful comment deeply appreciated

candykidAshburn, Virginia USAMay 26, 2014

I love it brother frog.......

online today!

Happygolucky4uTreasure Coast, Florida USAMay 26, 2014

Wow this is really a good poem. It is among one of my favorites of yours. Enjoyed my friend

darkhorse555OPdonegal, Donegal IrelandAug 6, 2014

smiling snowcovered truly beautiful comment dear friend heartfelt appreciated

darkhorse555OPdonegal, Donegal IrelandAug 6, 2014

christian croaking out loud ha ha thank you kindly dear friend wonderful comment deeply appreciated smiling

darkhorse555OPdonegal, Donegal IrelandAug 6, 2014

happy thank you ever so kindly truly wonderful comment dear friend heartfelt appreciated

Odette67Penrith, Cumbria, England UKAug 6, 2014

i just want
to be
everything to you

No man could ever say anything more beautiful to a woman, than those three lines above. As ever Liam, another gem of a poem from deep within your soul.

paloma66Manukau, Auckland New ZealandAug 6, 2014

A soulful write of love,wish everyone knew the true meaning of love.

weemick1960Fife, Scotland UKAug 8, 2014

Hi Liam, of all the mysteries of time, Love endures. You walk the road and sometimes It Is rocky, only fools like me don't see the rocks. Another pearl from your sea chest Liam. Once more your words of Love flow In a steady stream, It does not seem to matter, be they sad or happy the words of gold always flow. Keep the heart open and the words flowing. I found myself that I learned from each time I fell. I have lost so many times In this world called Love.
Have a good day. Catch you later. Your friend always....MIKE.

darkhorse555OPdonegal, Donegal IrelandAug 8, 2014

thank you so kindly chrissie for the amazing beautiful heartfelt comment dear friend deeply appreciated

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