paradise dream

kidnapping inside
this mind
you have
the key
to open
deep chambers
as you honey
bee sweetly
walk in

opening dreams
to another world
holding hands
together souls
uniting begins
dancing playing
loves soft music
paints destiny

thoughts coloring beauty
began racing dreams
spirit of reality
a tune singing
who just
grabs and kisses
you deeply
with all
the love
inside this
soft tender heart

exploding fireworks
inside the mind
rising waves
unfolding petals
touching feelings
timeless in
one scent essence
from out
of a spring ocean

waves of emotions
a breeze
tenderly blowing
ever so softly
gently i
am laying
myself your
magic carpet
upon the ground

sweeping kissing
your feet darling
i will always
smile as we
take each step
golden together
you and i

landing on
a treasure
one gem
holding strong
bathing warmly
within loves paradise
~ ~ ~ ~ ~
Posted: Apr 2014

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mcradloff
I think of the honey bee, most of them female doing all the work while a few males are responsible for impregnating the queen, I could live with that.roll eyes good luck easter egg
darkhorse555
mcrad wonderful smiling comment heartfelt beautiful dear friend deeply appreciated happy easter to you and your familyangel angel
Girlygirl196349
Oh Liam the love you have in your heart! No man like you should ever hurt . I know you love your honey bee. Beautiful poem as always Happy Easter my dear friendbunny easter bonnet bunny bunny




bunny bunny bunny easter bonnet


hug angel
Spartacus2012
Good stuff Liam..Happy Easter buddy!

Kenbunny
darkhorse555
laura dear friend it as a passing dream thank you kindly for the warm beautiful comment deeply appreciatedangel wine
darkhorse555
smiling ken thank you ever so much for the wonderful comment dear friend deeply appreciatedangel grin
123whisper
To charish such beautiful dream of love is wonderful gift to heart and you my dear friend has heart of gould that is delight to know wine teddybear
Redex
dream of dreams this one just lovely and tender as is you darkhorse.teddybear
candykid
The love is just pouring out Liam.....excellent write. .....thumbs up
orientalkoru
Oh the magic that is love...you make it sound even more magical with the way you string your words my dear friend... thumbs up
Happygolucky4u
Enjoyed your poem. What a lovely thought "landing on
a treasure one gem" smile
darkhorse555
wonderful comment whisper heartfelt beautiful deeply appreciated dear friendangel grin
Odette67
You are indeed mr romance of the corner - you have a big heart that overflows with love. Such a beautiful romantic poem Liam. purple heart
Poetnumber1
Impressive stuff Liam. This is one of my favorites from you.
SnowCoveredMuse
Excellent imagery,
~SAS~hug
darkhorse555
redex dear friend thank you for the wonderful comment deeply appreciatedangel wine
darkhorse555
christian thank you ever so kindly truly beautiful comment deeply appreciatedangel cheers
darkhorse555
orient dear friends love is always truly magical smiling thank you deeply wonderful comment greatly appreciatedangel wine
darkhorse555
happy dear friend thank you for the beautiful comment truly appreciated angel wine
darkhorse555
chrissie thank you so kindly for the touching beautiful comment dear friend heartfelt appreciatedangel wine
darkhorse555
thank you mm for the heartfelt beautiful comment deeply touching truly appreciatedangel angel grin
darkhorse555
snow truly wonderful comment thank you so much deeply appreciatedangel hug
123whisper
Excelent imaginary poem as always beautiful thoughts of yoursthumbs up It is pleasure to knwo the men as you who has only love in his heart teddybear
darkhorse555
thea thank you for such kindness and wonderful comment truly appreciated palangel grin
SCatlyn
I really need to tear myself away(got some things waiting for me-lol), but this was too tempting...

Beautiful... romantic... beautiful heart -
wonderful poetry teddybear teddybear teddybear

Cat purple heart
darkhorse555
cat dear friend thank you kindly for the heartfelt truly beautiful comment bless you palangel wine
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