by madtat29Farmington, New Mexico, USA
May 2014 829 Views 33 comments
Last poem(challenge)
This is my last poem,sad to say,
For today, my friends, I am going away,
On a craft built by other dimensional creatures,
What wild unimaginable indescribable features,
See I put out my thumb and they offered me a ride,
They stopped their spaceship and I got inside,
Wrote a little note to post at poets corner,
"Tony's on vacation eight galaxies over..."
For today, my friends, I am going away,
On a craft built by other dimensional creatures,
What wild unimaginable indescribable features,
See I put out my thumb and they offered me a ride,
They stopped their spaceship and I got inside,
Wrote a little note to post at poets corner,
"Tony's on vacation eight galaxies over..."
~ ~ ~ ~ ~
Posted: May 2014
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Comments (33)
They stopped their spaceship and I got inside,
This poem is way ahead of it's time, becaues in the future this could happen. Good stuff Tony.
Great Work!
Robert
Ken
I always enjoy your poetry it calls to me
"On a craft built by other dimensional creatures,
What wild unimaginable indescribable features,"
Take me with you
Mick.
A unique perspective on the challenge. ....thank you.
So glad you like my poetry :-)
Ill swing by Australia on my way out
Your sister in poetry...
Take care...
thoroughly enjoyed!
~SAS
Can you pick me up a loaf of martian bread on
the way back?
I must have just missed you.
As they say in Monty Python..
"And now...for something completely different."