If he would only call

So many days have come and
gone, still no word from him..
She wrapped her pink blanket
tightly around her and rocked
back and forth
'Where is he, she sobbed?'I need
him so much.'
She had marked X's on her calendar
for all those lost and lonely days,a
wrenching eighteen months without
his hugs and the way he'd twirl her
around the room..
She picked up pen and paper and
drew picture after picture of all those sunny
days and fun walks in the park
The days dragged on which turned
into more months
Not even a letter! 'Did something
happen to him she gasped?'
It's not like him to stay away for
so long..'
Overcome with grief, she just decided
to take a long walk in the rain
She put on her boots and twirled her little
red umbrella kicking through puddles as
she went
Just then the town bus slowed
to a stop and amidst the pouring
rain a man emerged from the bus
with a cane and limp
She stood there in total
disbelief
It was him!
It was daddy home from
the war!
He dropped his cane holding
his arms wide and his little nine
year old girl squealed with joy
'I was hurt and in the hospital
darling and my strength to poor
to write
He pulled a stack of his
little girls letters from his
nap sack and said, 'You
kept me alive my precious..
Let's go home..'
~ ~ ~ ~ ~
Posted: May 2014

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Comments (26)

cafetwo2010
jesse.. Thank you bro..Nice that you can relate
to this..I suppose it is an all to common story
yet one worthy to write about.
Girlygirl196349
Wow!! Nothing could stop her father not even war ! There's no greater love then we have for our children!! Beautiful and very heartfelt hug cheering angel
gnj4u
Hi, cafetwo2010,
…a stack of his little girls letters...'kept me alive my precious…' It's a gift when one is able to find the power to continue. Often, we and others are unaware of the powerful impact our seemingly small actions have. Thanks for sharing this important reminder.
cafetwo2010
Girlgirl.. Thank you kindly dear. The parental bond
is a deep ocean. Hope to write more of such.
cafetwo2010
gnj.. Haven't seen you in awhile dear Thank you
for your lucid comments as always.
JEANIEMAC
Isn't is sad how we no longer write each other letters?
The slant of the pen.
The time to gather your thoughts.
The "feel" of the person better expressed in longhand.
I miss it. So lovely nostalgic piece for me. Thank you.
Mizzy4
Very touching poem Jim,
Very enjoyable........Mick.

applause beer
cafetwo2010
Jeanie..You are so right dear. Can't remember the
last time I received a written letter.
cafetwo2010
Mizzy.. Thank you much friend.
itchywitch
I love this cafe...
a beautiful reminder to remembersad flower
hug wave
candykid
Super story-tell style......
ladyjewel
lips teddybear stunning and so beautiful, and just what I would expect from youhug
huges tight
123whisper
Very touching poem that broth tears to my eyes.
"You kept me alive my precious...Let's go home...' Most girls like to dream about they're father as Hero who look for them thumbs up
trurorob
Lovely write Jim.
Rob
cafetwo2010
Itchy.. Thank you dear. Glad you liked this
one.
cafetwo2010
Candykid.. Love this style bro. The sky's the
limit with this approach..at least for me.
cafetwo2010
Ladyjewel.. You know me to well dear..You've
leaked classified information. Lol
cafetwo2010
123whisper.. It makes me happy knowing I
can touch that little girls heart in women. Thank
you much.
cafetwo2010
rob..Much appreciated bro. Thank you kindly.
cafetwo2010
Orientalk.. Your comment is special and
so much appreciated dear.
SnowCoveredMuse
Very genuine,
heartfelt!

Nice job!

~SASconversing
mollybaby
Lovely bouquet
cafetwo2010
Snow.. Thank you my friend..Glad you stopped by dear.
cafetwo2010
Molly.. Your comment is lovely. Thank you dear.
Jenniferlovesong
HEARTFELT REALLY GREAT WRITING IS LIKE I AM SEEING IT TAKING PLACE AS I AM READING IT GREAT WORKwine
cafetwo2010
Jennifer..Thank you sweet for reading. You're very kind.
Cafe
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