So many days have come and gone, still no word from him.. She wrapped her pink blanket tightly around her and rocked back and forth 'Where is he, she sobbed?'I need him so much.' She had marked X's on her calendar for all those lost and lonely days,a wrenching eighteen months without his hugs and the way he'd twirl her around the room.. She picked up pen and paper and drew picture after picture of all those sunny days and fun walks in the park The days dragged on which turned into more months Not even a letter! 'Did something happen to him she gasped?' It's not like him to stay away for so long..' Overcome with grief, she just decided to take a long walk in the rain She put on her boots and twirled her little red umbrella kicking through puddles as she went Just then the town bus slowed to a stop and amidst the pouring rain a man emerged from the bus with a cane and limp She stood there in total disbelief It was him! It was daddy home from the war! He dropped his cane holding his arms wide and his little nine year old girl squealed with joy 'I was hurt and in the hospital darling and my strength to poor to write He pulled a stack of his little girls letters from his nap sack and said, 'You kept me alive my precious.. Let's go home..'
Hi, cafetwo2010, …a stack of his little girls letters...'kept me alive my precious…' It's a gift when one is able to find the power to continue. Often, we and others are unaware of the powerful impact our seemingly small actions have. Thanks for sharing this important reminder.
cafetwo2010OPHarford county, Maryland USAMay 4, 2014
Girlgirl.. Thank you kindly dear. The parental bond is a deep ocean. Hope to write more of such.
cafetwo2010OPHarford county, Maryland USAMay 4, 2014
gnj.. Haven't seen you in awhile dear Thank you for your lucid comments as always.
JEANIEMACLETTERKENNY, Donegal IrelandMay 4, 2014
Isn't is sad how we no longer write each other letters? The slant of the pen. The time to gather your thoughts. The "feel" of the person better expressed in longhand. I miss it. So lovely nostalgic piece for me. Thank you.
ladyjewelDurban, KwaZulu-Natal South AfricaMay 5, 2014
stunning and so beautiful, and just what I would expect from you huges tight
123whisperMelbourne, Victoria AustraliaMay 5, 2014
Very touching poem that broth tears to my eyes. "You kept me alive my precious...Let's go home...' Most girls like to dream about they're father as Hero who look for them
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to this..I suppose it is an all to common story
yet one worthy to write about.
…a stack of his little girls letters...'kept me alive my precious…' It's a gift when one is able to find the power to continue. Often, we and others are unaware of the powerful impact our seemingly small actions have. Thanks for sharing this important reminder.
is a deep ocean. Hope to write more of such.
for your lucid comments as always.
The slant of the pen.
The time to gather your thoughts.
The "feel" of the person better expressed in longhand.
I miss it. So lovely nostalgic piece for me. Thank you.
Very enjoyable........Mick.
last time I received a written letter.
a beautiful reminder to remember
huges tight
"You kept me alive my precious...Let's go home...' Most girls like to dream about they're father as Hero who look for them
Rob
one.
limit with this approach..at least for me.
leaked classified information. Lol
can touch that little girls heart in women. Thank
you much.
so much appreciated dear.
heartfelt!
Nice job!
~SAS
Cafe