breathless whispers

each breath baited
becomes breathless
when consumed
by another
you dance into
the soul baby

like a summer
waltzing warm breeze
golden begins shining
smiles beaming hot
sprinkling sugar
icing every word
sweetly for you

chocolate kisses
melting onto
your lips
tasting sweet warmness
embracing inside
each others heartbeat

holding desires mouthwatering
blown away feeling
emotions flowing soft
in the springs
of time
blooming heather
exploding color
in the vale

such a gentle
soft caressing
warm summer breeze
lifting feather touches
rippling over flesh
cotton cool
across the skin

dropping air
kissing your
every breath
that you breathe
fresh and free
lovingly whispers
silently upon
a wind stolen
in one heartbeat
~ ~ ~ ~ ~
Posted: May 2014

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Comments (33)

Girlygirl196349
Yet another beautiful poem Liam hug cheering angel wave
fjamesj9701
Whoa there!!!! Hold your horses Tonto and park this in your stable. You had me at "each breath becomes breathless" I seem to have taught you well Mr LDHlaugh Excellent piece my friend..Hiyo, Silver, and away!…Jessemotorcycle
Mizzy4
Nice romantic stuff Liam.
Mick.

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darkhorse555
thank you ever so much laura for the very beautiful comment deeply appreciatedangel wine
darkhorse555
jesse i forgot the lassoo smiling dear friend excellent comment heartfelt appreciatedangel grin
Poetnumber1
I never knew Jesse is your teacher. laugh Well done Liam. The imagery just did it for me. Romantically penned. cheers
mimzy333
well my romantic friend you sure know how to melt the heart with words.
123whisper
MR DARKHORSE;VERY ROMANTICLY PEN /BEAUTIFUL-applause YOU'RE THE PRINCE OF SWEET ROMANCE POEMS cheering handshake
Joseph1112
Another great one bro, imagery so flattering, well done! J applause cheers
darkhorse555
thank you so much for the wonderful comment mick dear friend deeply appreciatedangel
darkhorse555
smiling jesse ha ha he telepathically tell me what to write ha ha wonderful comment dear friend deeply appreciatedangel rolling on the floor laughing
rapturecapture
Hi Liam


Very sweet and O so romantic...Lovely

Martina xxxhug angel wave
darkhorse555
wonderful comment mick dear friend deeply appreciatedangel cheers
itchywitch
So beautiful and romanticheart wings

I loved itwave
ladyjewel
kissing your
every breath
that you breathe

sooooooo loving and romantic Liamhug teddybear
CelticPoet12
OH Oh My! And indeed you DID steal my in one heartbeat with this epic, stirring, seductive, utterly beautiful piece. I was suspended in your words and lost in a place that so makes me ache for my special someone to find me. Yes, I said that out loud. It takes craft and a magic pen to do that for me. Well done. I am left breathless, but so inspired to not give up. Thank you! Celticwine
SnowCoveredMuse
Liam,

This is truly amazing,
Impassioned to say the least,
but I must say this is
definitely a favorite of mine.

~SASconversing
darkhorse555
mm jesses teacher ha ha smiling wonderful comment i might just post something completely different deeply appreciated dear friendangel grin
lindsyjones
This is beautiful my dearest brother Liam....

Take care..
darkhorse555
mimzy thank you so much dear friend truly wonderful comment deeply appreciated angel grin
weemick1960
There Is not much that needs to be said about this piece Liam. It flows on a dream my friend. Every time I think you can go no further, you go further. You open the heart and let it sing and what beauty comes forth. The title actually says It all Liam. BRAVO!!! I bow before you my friend. I should soon be back stealing your roses. You didn't get those Dobermans did you?
Have a good evening. Catch you later. Your Friend always....MIKE.
darkhorse555
thea dear friend thank you kindly for the heartfelt beautiful comment truly appreciatedangel grin
darkhorse555
thea dear friend thank you kindly for the heartfelt beautiful comment truly appreciatedangel grin
darkhorse555
joseph thank you dear friend for the very beautiful comment deeply appreciatedangel thumbs up thumbs up
darkhorse555
thank you kindly martina for the wonderful comment deeply appreciatedangel wine
candykid
Pure power from the heart Liam. Just lovely emotion here.cheers
darkhorse555
itchy wonderful comment truly appreciated dear friendangel wine
darkhorse555
tracey thank you for the truly wonderful comment appreciated deeply dear friendangel grin
darkhorse555
celtic truly wonderful comment thank you so very much heartfelt beautiful appreciated deeply angel grin
darkhorse555
snow truly wonderful comment thank you dear friend greatly appreciated angel wine
darkhorse555
smiling happy wonderful comment dear friend truly appreciatedangel grin
darkhorse555
phyllis dear friend thank you for the ever so beautiful comment truly appreciated god blessangel wine
bollywood
classic . Romantic :)
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