The hunter set off just before the gloaming adjusting the straps of his high powered rifle it was a long way to where the stag usually fed a majestic stag sprouting twelve point antlers
Climbing high up the rugged mountain side he trekked fast covering the many miles at last he was where the stag usually fed casting around for signs of his tracks
Finding them he started stalking his prey up hill and down dale he carefully followed until at last he could see him way up ahead taking care to keep down wind he got close
Now about one hundred yards apart, he settled nestling into the thick bracken patiently waiting The stag climbed onto his favourite outlook and stood there poised as the gloaming lit the sky
Truly a wondrous sight he was in full prime the hunter sighed as he took steady aim then with a click it was finally time to shoot the stag hearing the sound took to his heels
The hunted checked his camera, yes he had him a perfect picture well satisfied he packed up this one picture had taken days of trailing him now he was forever captured in magnificent splendour
Poetnumber1St James, Port of Spain Trinidad and TobagoMay 15, 2014
Clever ending Linda. At first I thought the stag was going to fresh game for the hunter's bag. Great writing once more.
Poetnumber1St James, Port of Spain Trinidad and TobagoMay 15, 2014
''Going to be'' I meant. Regards.
mimzy333unknown, Washington USAMay 15, 2014
Linda this is truly what great poetry is all about, your poem brought me a smile as well as adventure as I read it.
shadow1950OPtaunton, Somerset, England UKMay 15, 2014
ty dearest MM luckily the fashion these days is to photograph rather than to kill. Unless there is express need like injury or culling to help persevere or if it is for food I would rather see them in pictures ty hugs
Hi, shadow1950, Being an avid photographer, I can relate to the satisfaction of getting the desired shot (with camera). And, the poet should be well-satisified with this write that poetically shares the image of the stag that stood there poised as the gloaming lit the sky and its hunter. Thank you for sharing.
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Being an avid photographer, I can relate to the satisfaction of getting the desired shot (with camera). And, the poet should be well-satisified with this write that poetically shares the image of the stag that stood there poised as the gloaming lit the sky and its hunter. Thank you for sharing.