In The Gloaming

The hunter set off just before the gloaming
adjusting the straps of his high powered rifle
it was a long way to where the stag usually fed
a majestic stag sprouting twelve point antlers

Climbing high up the rugged mountain side
he trekked fast covering the many miles
at last he was where the stag usually fed
casting around for signs of his tracks

Finding them he started stalking his prey
up hill and down dale he carefully followed
until at last he could see him way up ahead
taking care to keep down wind he got close

Now about one hundred yards apart, he settled
nestling into the thick bracken patiently waiting
The stag climbed onto his favourite outlook
and stood there poised as the gloaming lit the sky

Truly a wondrous sight he was in full prime
the hunter sighed as he took steady aim
then with a click it was finally time to shoot
the stag hearing the sound took to his heels

The hunted checked his camera, yes he had him
a perfect picture well satisfied he packed up
this one picture had taken days of trailing him
now he was forever captured in magnificent splendour
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Posted: May 2014

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Comments (9)

Poetnumber1
Clever ending Linda. At first I thought the stag was going to fresh game for the hunter's bag. Great writing once more.
Poetnumber1
''Going to be'' I meant. Regards.hug
mimzy333
Linda this is truly what great poetry is all about, your poem brought me a smile as well as adventure as I read it.
shadow1950
ty dearest MM luckily the fashion these days is to photograph rather than to kill. Unless there is express need like injury or culling to help persevere or if it is for food I would rather see them in pictures ty hugs purple heart angel
gnj4u
Hi, shadow1950,
Being an avid photographer, I can relate to the satisfaction of getting the desired shot (with camera). And, the poet should be well-satisified with this write that poetically shares the image of the stag that stood there poised as the gloaming lit the sky and its hunter. Thank you for sharing.
Joseph1112
Hey shadow I concur with MM, thought it was going to b a sad ending glad it wasn't, so captivated, awesome write! J applause hug bouquet
shadow1950
ty Cameal appreciated hugs
shadow1950
hi Joy and ty nice to see you hugs
shadow1950
ty Joseph greatly appreciated hugs
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