Hi Liam O.K. Is right, that was awesome fun to read! Hehe J
Girlygirl196349Fullerton, California USAMay 23, 2014
Hey you . I really enjoyed reading this made me smile .
Odette67Penrith, Cumbria, England UKMay 23, 2014
fish like piranhas swimming inside devouring this mind
I know this feeling well. I guess I must have had a sense of humour by-pass - because I thought this poem was more sad than funny - a dark poem I would say. Never the less it is a good poem Liam.
thank you laura so much truly wonderful comment deeply appreciated dear friend
peachmelbawexford, Wexford IrelandAug 8, 2014
It's different Liam very dark like a black comedy ..I like it alot because your really expressing just how it is at the moment, ...fair play because life is made up of light and dark we are one without the other..where there is dark there is light waiting just waiting.well done Liam on this poem.
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withingswimming inside
devouring this mind
I know this feeling well.
I guess I must have had a sense of humour by-pass - because I thought this poem was more sad than funny - a dark poem I would say. Never the less it is a good poem Liam.
Ken
Awasame
But we do feel sometimes when we seem so helplessly attacked by devouring darkness eating us alive..
Take care my friend.. It will get better I am sure...
Love you Liam, my brother.