Obvious

by OndosSydney, New South Wales, Australia

Jun 2014 586 Views 9 comments

Obvious

Author: Ondos

I’ve heard advice in plenitude
I’ve read quotes galore
I’ve been persuaded and I bought
Into dreams in forever-more

I believe my own ignorance
And keep my own score
As I take the joy out of bliss
Piece by piece, more and more

Then a rare moment comes along
When time stands still and I glimpse
The forever illusive obvious
I so often seem to miss.

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Posted: Jun 2014

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Comments (9)

Girlygirl196349Fullerton, California USAJun 15, 2014

Great poem I really enjoyed reading this

Mizzy4Navan, Meath IrelandJun 15, 2014

We're all guilty of this Condos,
Good poem.
Mick.

Happygolucky4uTreasure Coast, Florida USAJun 15, 2014

I love those times. Tho not all are happy things I have missed. It is the growth I feel as a person I love from learning. Nicely penned.

fjamesj9701DunkinDonuts, Florida USAJun 15, 2014

I really dig this much Mr O, well done …Jesse

darkhorse555donegal, Donegal IrelandJun 16, 2014

a lot of us here can relate very beautifully penned piece excellent vision

candykidAshburn, Virginia USAJun 16, 2014

It is obvious that I am totally oblivious to the thoughts that obviously are objective. I object to the objectives that are obviously absolutely obvious. I obviate the obverse in the reverse to object what is illsusively objectionable. ......I am an illusion that is odd.......