The most precious gift

When my time is up and I'm ready to go
To a place no one can find
I'll take my chance to cast a last glance
At the past I leave behind.

I hope to see a fine mosaic
Of a million shapes and colours
Each shape, an experience
Each colour, avid valour.

I hope to hear a symphony
By the Angels heavenly choir
Each melody, an emotion
Each chorus fulfilled desire.

I hope to smell a potpourri
Of exquisite fragrances
The scent of love I'll keep with me
As my everlasting essence.

I hope to taste the moist air
While my last breath subsists
For all the sweetness will be there
Of the most beautiful lips I've kissed.

I hope to feel my last heartbeat
Fill with gratefulness run rife
For the most precious gift I have received
The gift that was my life.
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Posted: May 2014

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lindsyjonesonline now!
Just profound Ondos.

A most precious gift indeed. Life.

Take care and welcome back.

So great to read you.
Poetnumber1
Its great to read from you once more Ondos. A most gifted write.
trurorob
Nice poem J, nice to see you back
Rob
CelticPoet12
Hello Ondos, welcome back and I agree, a splendid write. Be well, Celtic
orientalkoru
Great to read from you again Ondos...thumbs up
Odette67

I hope to feel my last heartbeat
Fill with gratefulness run rife
For the most precious gift I have received
The gift that was my life.


How lovely to see you posting here again John - You have not lost your touch - This is such a thought provoking poem - Your time will not be up for a long time. hug purple heart
Earlgreytea
[I hope to taste the moist air While my last breath subsists]

Wow! original, inspiring..., thank you...
fjamesj9701
Roaringly good stuff Ondos. Im fascinated by the "time" and often wonder will I experience what you have versed. Well doneā€¦Jessehandshake
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