i always remember these people fleeing across concrete armored posts all roads in were fortified invading soldiers take to the streets
sticks in pointing guns at women and children the mind still bugs me faces of pain down trodden counting back years plight of generations sorrowful mysteries
becoming refugees in their own war torn country where they themselves were born grew up then had children
sounds so sad heartbreaking countries without voices a world sat back nodding their heads silently said nothing shame allowing this in a just world many years later has it been forgotten our soldiers that died in a struggle
we all take a side in war ireland still remains divided one of her four seats dating back to the pyrmaids partially taken strangely why is that we are one big teddy bear
a question i ask myself over and over again invading someone's space surely one tyrant taking land by force is it not a crime anymore in anyone's books
i myself call it stealing whats not rightfully theirs in the first place does the bible not quote thou shalt not steal christian virtues as they use it in courts
justice a joke a coin with two heads makes the whole system corrupt into the very core
Four Green Fields? No war is ever justified. But to the victor go the spoils. In our case, they could not desert all those Prods they had exported here to take over the show. Tiocfaidh Ar La??
You don't often write these types of pieces that stray far off of the topic of love. This must be something that stirs an emotion deep inside. Truth is no one owns anything except themselves. Land, houses, cars, money, spouse's and even children dont belong to anyone. These are all items that God lets us borrow for the short time we are on this earth. Lovely writing straight from the heart Liam......
Unfortunately Liam, War is not about who is right but rather who is left ! Very strong write my friend, Mick.
diana_1San fernando, San Fernando Trinidad and TobagoJun 24, 2014
an awesome write... looking at war and strife, pain and death... your pen is mightier than the sword...
RedexNorthumberland, England UKJun 25, 2014
wow I enjoyed that so much and agree might I add. your last 7 lines depicts life itself all over the world at the moment. Well done you is all I can say.
Odette67Penrith, Cumbria, England UKJun 25, 2014
Dear Liam I feel your pain and anger in this heartfelt poem. From this English lady to my Irish poet buddy - here is a ( hug )
ken thank you dear friend for the very beautiful comment deeply appreciated
Poetnumber1St James, Port of Spain Trinidad and TobagoJun 28, 2014
Enjoyed reading this heartfelt piece which succinctly depicts what is not only prevalent in Ireland but in many parts of the world down to this day. Loved this one!
jesse i always look at wars that it is a pit full of rage fueled by power and greed nato itself a big driving wheel russian roulete whos next smiling in the chambers ireland is getting devoured they are selling out fishing etc really enjoyed reading your thoughts old pal smiling have a great day dear frien
shadow1950taunton, Somerset, England UKJul 18, 2014
dear Liam you have highlighted Ireland's troubles well masterly pen mate hugs
chrissie thank you so kindly dearest friend wonderful comment heartfelt appreciated
rapturecapturekerry, Kerry IrelandJul 23, 2014
Hi Liam
I have the same view as you on this one...The Justice system is a joke...and only seems to work for the corrupt in society. Enjoyed reading your wonderful poem Thank you for sharing
mimzy dear friend so true but its the greed that turns a blind eye the guilty hide behind a mask of lies wonderful comment hit on the nail head beautifully god bless thank you kindly
yeah martina its such a crooked world look at our leaders highest paid in the world what an example a country in recession them clinging to the purse strings crooks sinking this ship selling our nation out taking bribes yet they still get visas a two tier society we live in the poor cut cut cut wages yet theirs go up each year even they are running this country to the ground not doing their job right not one banker has been held accountable or faced charges looks like they were all in it together robbing the taxpayers money wonderful comment dear friend deeply appreciated
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No war is ever justified.
But to the victor go the spoils.
In our case, they could not desert all those Prods they had exported here to take over the show.
Tiocfaidh Ar La??
Ken
War is not about who is right
but rather who is left !
Very strong write my friend,
Mick.
Well done you is all I can say.
( hug )
brilliant
I have the same view as you on this one...The Justice system is a joke...and only seems to work for the corrupt in society.
Enjoyed reading your wonderful poem
Thank you for sharing
Martina xxx