dividing spoils

i always remember
these people
fleeing across
concrete armored posts
all roads in
were fortified
invading soldiers
take to
the streets

sticks in
pointing guns
at women and children
the mind
still bugs me
faces of pain
down trodden
counting back years
plight of generations
sorrowful mysteries

becoming refugees
in their own
war torn country
where they
themselves were born
grew up
then had children

sounds so sad
heartbreaking countries
without voices
a world sat back
nodding their heads
silently said nothing
shame allowing this
in a just world
many years later
has it been forgotten
our soldiers
that died
in a struggle

we all
take a side
in war
ireland still
remains divided
one of her
four seats
dating back
to the pyrmaids
partially taken
strangely why is that
we are one
big teddy bear

a question
i ask myself
over and over again
invading someone's space
surely one tyrant
taking land
by force
is it not
a crime anymore
in anyone's books

i myself
call it stealing
whats not
rightfully theirs
in the first place
does the bible
not quote
thou shalt not steal
christian virtues
as they use it
in courts

justice a joke
a coin
with two heads
makes the
whole system
corrupt into
the very core
~ ~ ~ ~ ~
Posted: Jun 2014

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JEANIEMAC
Four Green Fields?
No war is ever justified.
But to the victor go the spoils.
In our case, they could not desert all those Prods they had exported here to take over the show.
Tiocfaidh Ar La??
Spartacus2012
Well penned Liam and thought provoking...

Kentip hat
darkhorse555
thank you jean for the very beautiful comment deeply appreciatedangel wine
candykid
You don't often write these types of pieces that stray far off of the topic of love. This must be something that stirs an emotion deep inside. Truth is no one owns anything except themselves. Land, houses, cars, money, spouse's and even children dont belong to anyone. These are all items that God lets us borrow for the short time we are on this earth. Lovely writing straight from the heart Liam......
Mizzy4
Unfortunately Liam,
War is not about who is right
but rather who is left !
Very strong write my friend,
Mick.
tip hat
diana_1
an awesome write... looking at war and strife, pain and death... your pen is mightier than the sword...
Redex
wow I enjoyed that so much and agree might I add. your last 7 lines depicts life itself all over the world at the moment.
Well done you is all I can say.hug
Odette67
Dear Liam I feel your pain and anger in this heartfelt poem. From this English lady to my Irish poet buddy - here is a
( hug )hug purple heart
darkhorse555
ken thank you dear friend for the very beautiful comment deeply appreciatedangel grin
Poetnumber1
Enjoyed reading this heartfelt piece which succinctly depicts what is not only prevalent in Ireland but in many parts of the world down to this day. Loved this one!cheers
darkhorse555
christian thank you so much for the wonderful comment now and again i write this way deeply appreciated dear friend god blessangel cheers
mimzy333
There is no justice in this world of man only when Christ comes and takes back what belongs to God, will there truly be justice.
darkhorse555
so very true mick wonderful comment dear friend deeply appreciatedangel grin
cuttersbinrods
well penned liam
brilliant
darkhorse555
jesse i always look at wars that it is a pit full of rage fueled by power and greed nato itself a big driving wheel russian roulete whos next smiling in the chambers ireland is getting devoured they are selling out fishing etc really enjoyed reading your thoughts old pal smiling have a great day dear frienangel grin
shadow1950
dear Liam you have highlighted Ireland's troubles well masterly pen mate hugs
darkhorse555
chrissie thank you so kindly dearest friend wonderful comment heartfelt appreciatedangel hug
rapturecapture
Hi Liam

I have the same view as you on this one...The Justice system is a joke...and only seems to work for the corrupt in society.
Enjoyed reading your wonderful poem
Thank you for sharing

Martina xxxhug teddybear angel
darkhorse555
mimzy dear friend so true but its the greed that turns a blind eye the guilty hide behind a mask of lies wonderful comment hit on the nail head beautifully god bless thank you kindly angel grin
darkhorse555
mark thank you kindly for the beautiful comment were are you hiding yourself these days long time no talk angel grin
darkhorse555
linda thank you dearest friend truly beautiful comment smiling deeply appreciatedangel wine
darkhorse555
yeah martina its such a crooked world look at our leaders highest paid in the world what an example a country in recession them clinging to the purse strings crooks sinking this ship selling our nation out taking bribes yet they still get visas a two tier society we live in the poor cut cut cut wages yet theirs go up each year even they are running this country to the ground not doing their job right not one banker has been held accountable or faced charges looks like they were all in it together robbing the taxpayers money wonderful comment dear friend deeply appreciated angel grin
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