City of pain

Heartbeat weak,
About to stop,
Like the windings
of a worn out clock,
Only the faintest of
ticks and tocks,
I stare in despair
at the repair shop,
Every door,
boarded and locked,
Come with me see
We'll take a walk,
Through the streets
of a town that time forgot,
I'll talk of things
that used to be,
Tales of people
like you and me,
The roads will tell
of a brighter time,
Busy, bustling passersby,
Laughing, talking,
living life,
Now only lonely echoes
and broken street lights,
Down dead end alleys,
Past memory lanes,
Trash and litter
all over the place,
Dumpsters all full
like its garbage day,
Desolate and deserted
so noone stays,
Just one inhabitant
stands in the rain,
Alone in his own,
City of Pain...
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Posted: Jul 2014
About this poem:
Its sad...but Im happy its so sad...Im glad I'm good at it...

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Comments (7)

Mizzy4
Poetry that rises from
the soul is always
the best stuff !
I felt that Tony.....

Mick.
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Macduff5
Hi Madtat,

This reminds me so much of T.S Eliot's poem "Preludes." I could recite the first part by heart but I don't want to bore you. Nicely done. cheers
JEANIEMAC
Madtat,
I love your little "story poems".
All this...and modest too.
madtat29
Thanks Mick...just whats been coming out lately...have a good one bud...cheers
madtat29
Ty Jeanie..appreciate the compliments dear wine
madtat29
Ty Mac I love being educated by the poets here..I hadnt read preludes till you mentioned it...fantastic work Thank you for the comparison to such a great poet cheers
madtat29
No way could i be bored reading poetry...I soak it up like a sponge...Ty Odette..Mad love wine
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