Drinkin

by madtat29Farmington, New Mexico, USA

Jul 2014 402 Views 8 comments

Drinkin

Thinkin and Drinkin went out one weekend,
Thinkin went cause he wanted to play,
But Drinkin was lookin for trouble that day,
See he wouldn't listen to Thinkin's demands,
That's when Drinkin got way out of hand...

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Posted: Jul 2014

About this poem:

I'll learn eventually ...or maybe not

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Girlygirl196349Fullerton, California USAJul 24, 2014

I'm thinking you might need to start thinking and not Hang around drinkin cause he's got no brain and he will only cause you pain!,

Love the poem hope your head is feeling okay

JEANIEMACLETTERKENNY, Donegal IrelandJul 24, 2014

I see in my 45 year old brother the same traits my father had.
Once the uisce beatha (Water of life)/whiskey took hold, he became unreasonably aggressive and paranoid.
I am death on spirits from those awful memories.
Please take the upper hand..

rapturecapturekerry, Kerry IrelandJul 24, 2014

Hi madtat

You could repeat this verse as the Chorus...

I think it would make a great song! Thinkin and Drinkin

Thank you for sharing

Martina xxx

Mizzy4Navan, Meath IrelandJul 25, 2014

A short poem but a huge story !
Take it easy Tony,
Best wishes
Mick.

madtat29OPFarmington, New Mexico USAJul 27, 2014

Hello Jeanie. .sad when things turn out that way...some people cant control their habits or dont have will power to resist...I could see how that would color your view of alcohol. ..I take full responsibility for everything I do...I never blame the liqour... love it too much...Thank you for the concern

madtat29OPFarmington, New Mexico USAJul 27, 2014

Whoops...missed ya girly...lol need to think more for sure!

madtat29OPFarmington, New Mexico USAJul 27, 2014

Thanks again Martina.I know i write a bunch about drinking...too much maybe...not trying to glorify it I just write about what i know...if only i could play an instrument..oh the songs i would sing lol ...mad love

madtat29OPFarmington, New Mexico USAJul 27, 2014

Heya Mick thanks bud..these days I take it anyway i can get it...ha have a good one

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