They locked into each other, Like long-lost relations, Orphans divided by time. He bit her shoulder & entered her blood forever. She bit his tongue & changed the tone of his song. They walked together astonished Not to be lonely. They sought their loneliness Like lost dogs. But they were joined together By tongue & shoulder. His nightmares woke her, Her daydreams startled him. He f*cked so hard, he thought he'd climb back in her. She came so hard, Her skin seemed to dissolve. She feared she had no yearning Left to write with. He feared she'd suck him dry & glide away. They spoke of all these things & locked together. She figured out The jigsaw of his heart. & he unscrambled her & placed the pieces With such precision Nothing came apart.
Hi Snow, a fine sensual write you put before us today. Some day shall come but In what shape and guise you are yet to see. A sensual flow of alluring words come forth from your pen onto the page and Into the readers mind. Your vision can live on as dream within the minds of all who read. The words give the vision, the mind gives life. Well, I shall be having a good time when I sleep tonight. I hope I put that down right. Enjoyed someday. Have a good day. Catch you later. Your Friend always....MIKE.
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Have a good day. Catch you later. Your Friend always....MIKE.
Glad you liked it,
Thank you for taking
the time to read!
Hugssss SAS
glad you liked it,
thanks for your kind words
my friend.
SAS
thanks for stopping by.
glad you liked it.
SAS
Ken
Glad you liked it!
SAS
You are an amazing poet!
Thank you for you generous
comment!
SAS
My kinda poem !
Mick.
Just a tad passionate :)
Glad you liked it!
SAS