Star spangled

by darkhorse555Donegal, Ireland

Aug 2014 609 Views 26 comments

Star spangled

Here I am darling
at the center
of my everything,
gazing over a lake
looking upon
silver stars lovingly
dancing inside ripples.

Sparkling in a moving mass
kisses gently
touching deep waters,
blinking diamond thoughts
upon a moon face,
reflections flooding
through the mind
every last one shines
sweetly on
you my love.

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Posted: Aug 2014

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Comments (26)

weemick1960Fife, Scotland UKAug 8, 2014

Hi Liam, a new write, brilliant. As always my friend, you rise and fly. Simplistic beauty shines from each line. You still know how to paint those dazzling pictures Liam. Let the beauty and Love free from your heart, Let It sing my friend, let It sing. I enjoyed the read. Still stealing my stars I see, or was It your turn? I can't remember.
Have a good day. Catch you later. Your Friend always....MIKE.

Odette67Penrith, Cumbria, England UKAug 8, 2014

Dear Liam,
I was just about to go to my bed, then I read your beautiful poem, I just had o comment, because I love these lines.

Here I am darling
at the center
of my everything,

Awesome

Girlygirl196349Fullerton, California USAAug 8, 2014

Stunning eautiful Poem Liam

ImagineLoveVenus, Montana USAAug 8, 2014

blinking diamond thoughts
upon a moon face

Your words are so visionary!

Spartacus2012Biloxi, Mississippi USAAug 8, 2014

Well done old friend..

Ken

darkhorse555OPdonegal, Donegal IrelandAug 9, 2014

smiling mike like the half moon wonderful comment dear friend deeply appreciated

Mizzy4Navan, Meath IrelandAug 9, 2014

Gorgeous imagery Liam,
A special write.....
Mick.

SnowCoveredMusefarmington, Maine USAAug 9, 2014

Wow, Loved
each and every line!!!!

SAS

darkhorse555OPdonegal, Donegal IrelandAug 9, 2014

thank you deeply chrissie smiling hope you got a good sleep afterwards wonderful comment dear friend truly appreciated

bard76Risca, Gwent, Wales UKAug 9, 2014

First poem I've read of yours for awhile..... you haven't lost your touch.....brilliant....

darkhorse555OPdonegal, Donegal IrelandAug 10, 2014

thank you kindly laura wonderful comment dear friend deeply appreciated

darkhorse555OPdonegal, Donegal IrelandAug 10, 2014

thank you kindly imagine wonderful comment appreciated deeply

CelticPoet12Prescott, Arizona USAAug 10, 2014

Liam, what a stunningly beautiful write. Once in a while, a poem wraps itself around my senses and there is a real connection. That happened with your piece just now. GOOD JOB!~ I hope you're out there somewhere getting published, just sayin. Blessings, Celtic!~

Poetnumber1St James, Port of Spain Trinidad and TobagoAug 12, 2014

Beautiful lines throughout Liam. A joy to read.

wayne34liverpool, Merseyside, England UKAug 12, 2014

Cool write. Enjoable read my friend