All I can say is, been there at that edge and I stepped down to the grounding earth and see the moon, stars and wind much differently. Thank you for the sobering write. Celtic
ImagineLoveVenus, Montana USAAug 10, 2014
I enjoy your writing, it brings such sweet visions to play among my thought!
Hi SAS, An excellent write as always. I've almost taken that step, a few times, but that was long ago,In those days when I thought I had no worth. It opens up memories I never turn from. It was all a part of my wacky life. You express this one well. I enjoyed the read. Have a good day. Catch you later. Your Friend always....MIKE.
Poetnumber1St James, Port of Spain Trinidad and TobagoAug 11, 2014
You transport my mind to the place where you envision. I felt each image come alive Sas. Excellent write!
Odette67Penrith, Cumbria, England UKAug 20, 2014
She is trapped, mind and soul, in the mortal body. Which binds her unconditionally to the earth.
My God SAS, this is me, you rock. My favourite poetess.
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Penned beautifully....
Mick.
you are so kind...
SAS
Have a good day. Catch you later. Your Friend always....MIKE.
in the mortal body.
Which binds her unconditionally
to the earth.
My God SAS, this is me, you rock. My favourite poetess.
This is so unsurpassingly beautiful - poignancy and longing permeating every superbly written line. A wonderful write!
Kindest regards
Bill