For someone so beautiful, you died so young Didn't give a moments notice and you're life had just begun I remember the things that you would do in the past Mutilate your body with a bloody knifes' slash You would write dark poetry that only few could read An outward way angel that felt like the bad seed I know your reasons for taking your life, for what's been done But that doesn't make me feel better, you left behind a son Your father could've kept his hands to himself, I know he's a bastard And his daughters heart, your heart, he twisted and shattered I tried to be there for you, tried to console your shame I still remember the nights that i would cry with you in the rain And now you're gone, one less diamond to shine in this world of sorrow I will always love and miss you, holding onto your memory like there's no tomorrow
wow. incredible sadness held here. not all daddies are worth their weight in gold, true fact. seems almost contrite to say thank you for sharing, dementia, but i'm glad you did.
andrew149Southbourne, nr.Bournemouth, Dorset, England UKSep 28, 2010
Y'now, In my opinion, your writing has really come on so much over the last year and months, glad you came back to the corner.....nice write Dementia.....Andrew
RedexNorthumberland, England UKSep 28, 2010
I can share some feelings in this writting, lost diamond, and part of yourself goes when life is cut short. Yes apt title thankyou for sharing
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Thanks for sharing.
thanks for sharing these thoughts here,
Great Poem my dear ..I was feeling the pain
Take Care Always
Swan