Storming into thoughts

by darkhorse555Donegal, Ireland

Aug 2014 556 Views 18 comments

Storming into thoughts

I awoke
this morning
thinking about you.
An awful stormy night
howling natures choir
cried her song,
clouds opened lamenting
looking across
the marsh lands
strong winds blowing

I can see clearly
that there is a flood
rolling down
the mountains,
like a vein
mapping her direction,
sweeping vision out
towards the sea.

Little drops of rain
striking brow,
thoughts dreaming
in that one moment
love you sure got me ,
hook line and sinker
I was thinking
of you smiling.

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Posted: Aug 2014

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Comments (18)

mimzy333unknown, Washington USAAug 13, 2014

now that is a powerful poem my friend

darkhorse555OPdonegal, Donegal IrelandAug 14, 2014

mimzy lovely to see you thank you ever so kindly for the heartfelt beautiful comment deeply appreciated dear friend

Poetnumber1St James, Port of Spain Trinidad and TobagoAug 14, 2014

The second stanza is just so awesome. Amazing piece.

ImagineLoveVenus, Montana USAAug 14, 2014

I like the ambience of your thoughts! "I was thinking
of you smiling".

Perfect!

Spartacus2012Biloxi, Mississippi USAAug 14, 2014

Well done Liam..

Ken

weemick1960Fife, Scotland UKAug 14, 2014

Hi Liam, In at the coo's tail as usual. As always Liam, excellent write. No matter what you write you always open the mind to a plethora of Images to touch the senses. Another little piece of Gold my friend. Let the pen run gold always.
Have a good day. Catch you later. Your Friend always....MIKE.

RAVENGYPSY42USA, Tennessee USAAug 19, 2014

Beautiful.....

FellsmanLake District, Cumbria, England UKAug 19, 2014

Simply exquisite Liam: Nature even in her wildest moments so often helps us see things more clearly and objectively, which is why nature and poetry are so inextricably linked, and therefore a source of such inspiration for writers.

Best wishes

Bill

123whisperMelbourne, Victoria AustraliaAug 19, 2014

Beautiful write Liam

True romantic

darkhorse555OPdonegal, Donegal IrelandAug 19, 2014

thank you deeply mm truly outstanding beautiful heartfelt comment appreciated greatly dear friend

Odette67Penrith, Cumbria, England UKAug 19, 2014

Little drops of rain
striking brow,
thoughts dreaming
in that one moment
love you sure got me ,
hook line and sinker
I was thinking
of you smiling.

I was swept away reading this awesome poem Liam, I imagined I felt the rain on my face, I love walking in wild weather, it is so invigorating feeling the rain.