Drawing dream love

Water dripping mist
a shawl falling over embracing love
you got me honey
all tied up smiling
one gem treasured gift
together a great ocean wave
sugar tasting desires
moistly lips blushing
strawberry passion kiss

Apple of the eye
burning a fire inside Heaven
a snowflake melting
softly to you
in the deepest
softness of a heart

Inside out of shadows
silver star
dazzling deeply beautiful
on all shining reflections
one dream stunning
gold blindly with love

Opens up from a soul
petals gently whispering
softly in warm winds
blowing gently
in each rippling flutter
of a breath

singing echoes
kissing each wave
landing on each skip
of your heartbeat
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Posted: Aug 2014

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123whisper
'strawberry passion kiss' applause
Opens up from a soul
petals gently whispering
softly in warm winds ,
blowing gently in each rippling flutters
singing echoes kissing each wave
landing on skips of your heartbeat .cheering
Beautiful romantic poem heart beating thumbs up
ImagineLove
Liam this is so delightful! angel So nice to read and let my mind drift, making me smile all the while! hug purple heart
Girlygirl196349
Soooo beautiful!!! gift hug wine
Spartacus2012
Good stuff Liam..

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ladygwen123
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Liam
"landing on a skip of your heartbeat"
What a line. WOW
That's a once in a blue moon line
I woke the other night an said!
"The pen never kissed the paper so sweet.
I quick grabbed pen an paper and wrote it down.
Next day Iwrote about Blasket Island writers and used that line. My muse must have skiped ino my dream. haha
Such a nice write Liam. Thank you










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Mizzy4
Lovely write Liam,
Great choice of words !
Mick.

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wayne34
The taste of desire your words well chossen within this poem delight to read my friend cheers
SCatlyn
This is gorgeous, darkhorse... and
'...kissing each wave landing on each skip of your heartbeat'
is even more gorgeous - more accurately described, it is more than gorgeous rose angel
darkhorse555
thank you deeply thea truly wonderful comment deeply appreciated dear friend angel grin
darkhorse555
imagine thank you kindly for the very beautiful comment deeply appreciated dear friend angel grin
darkhorse555
laura dear friend thank you for the very beautiful comment deeply appreciatedangel grin
darkhorse555
ken pal thank you dear friend for the wonderful comment greatly appreciatedangel grin
darkhorse555
ladygwyne thank you for the very beautiful comment dear friend deeply appreciated angel grin
darkhorse555
mick dear pal thank you ever so kindly for the wonderful comment heartfelt appreciatedangel grin
bard76
Liam, you never disappoint.....always beautifully written, pleasure to read and there must be romance running through your veins....David....
darkhorse555
wayne dear friend thank you for the wonderful comment have s great christmas pal angel grin
darkhorse555
truly beautiful comment cat wishing you and your family a very happy and joyful christmasangel grin
darkhorse555
david smiling pal its about the only place flowing out in the pen wonderful comment thank you deeply pal wishing you a light filled christmas palangel grin
Poetnumber1
Your poem transported me to such a tranquil scene of romance. Lovely use of words. Enjoyed the read Liam.
darkhorse555
mm old pal great to see you i sure hope you had a great christmas dear friend wonderful comment heartfelt appreciated wishing you a happy and joyous year angel grin
Leony1510
Funking brilliant I'm in awe great stuff cheers
darkhorse555
leony dear pal thank you for the amazing beautiful comment deeply appreciated angel grin
peachmelba
Inspiring romantic very beautiful penned piece ,your poem is butterflies in the tummy,

In a nice way,

cheers .
avias
Another wonderful expression of love...you seem to never run out of words...truly enjoy... pointing flower rose
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