Water dripping mist a shawl falling over embracing love you got me honey all tied up smiling one gem treasured gift together a great ocean wave sugar tasting desires moistly lips blushing strawberry passion kiss
Apple of the eye burning a fire inside Heaven a snowflake melting softly to you in the deepest softness of a heart
Inside out of shadows silver star dazzling deeply beautiful on all shining reflections one dream stunning gold blindly with love
Opens up from a soul petals gently whispering softly in warm winds blowing gently in each rippling flutter of a breath
singing echoes kissing each wave landing on each skip of your heartbeat
123whisperMelbourne, Victoria AustraliaAug 23, 2014
'strawberry passion kiss' Opens up from a soul petals gently whispering softly in warm winds , blowing gently in each rippling flutters singing echoes kissing each wave landing on skips of your heartbeat . Beautiful romantic poem
ImagineLoveVenus, Montana USAAug 23, 2014
Liam this is so delightful! So nice to read and let my mind drift, making me smile all the while!
Girlygirl196349Fullerton, California USAAug 23, 2014
' Liam "landing on a skip of your heartbeat" What a line. WOW That's a once in a blue moon line I woke the other night an said! "The pen never kissed the paper so sweet. I quick grabbed pen an paper and wrote it down. Next day Iwrote about Blasket Island writers and used that line. My muse must have skiped ino my dream. haha Such a nice write Liam. Thank you
wayne34liverpool, Merseyside, England UKAug 24, 2014
The taste of desire your words well chossen within this poem delight to read my friend
SCatlynBrecon, South Glamorgan, Wales UKSep 4, 2014
This is gorgeous, darkhorse... and '...kissing each wave landing on each skip of your heartbeat' is even more gorgeous - more accurately described, it is more than gorgeous
mm old pal great to see you i sure hope you had a great christmas dear friend wonderful comment heartfelt appreciated wishing you a happy and joyous year
Leony1510A CAVE IN THE ATLANTIC SEA, Westmeath IrelandJan 13, 2015
Comments (24)
Opens up from a soul
petals gently whispering
softly in warm winds ,
blowing gently in each rippling flutters
singing echoes kissing each wave
landing on skips of your heartbeat .
Beautiful romantic poem
Ken
Liam
"landing on a skip of your heartbeat"
What a line. WOW
That's a once in a blue moon line
I woke the other night an said!
"The pen never kissed the paper so sweet.
I quick grabbed pen an paper and wrote it down.
Next day Iwrote about Blasket Island writers and used that line. My muse must have skiped ino my dream. haha
Such a nice write Liam. Thank you
'
Great choice of words !
Mick.
'...kissing each wave landing on each skip of your heartbeat'
is even more gorgeous - more accurately described, it is more than gorgeous
In a nice way,
.