Swept away beautiful

A painter of expressions
begins stroking deeply gold threaded feelings
in the warm silken soft tenderness
weaving emotion touching sweetly kisses
laying them with you
deep inside love treasured
within one thousand dreams

Your voice calls to me sweetly
underneath velvet satin darkness
catching a shining star
sparks behind the curtains
gifting one wish in your light
upon a trail of dust
sprinkling silver magically
cast under your spell

All wishes landed on perfect
the very day we met darling
enchanting magic flowers singing
waltzing butterflies dance
spinning around the soul's heart and beauty
adoring you love forever
one lifetime with a dream
~ ~ ~ ~ ~
Posted: Aug 2014

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Comments (18)

soulgoddess
teddybear So stunningly beautiful teddybear hug
darkhorse555
thank you kindly angeline truly touching beautiful comment deeply appreciatedangel hug angel
Spartacus2012
Awesome romantic write Liam!

Kenbeer
Mizzy4
Lovely romantic message Liam,
Regards Mick.

beer
darkhorse555
ken thank you ever so much pal wonderful comment appreciated deeply angel grin
Girlygirl196349
Very beautiful Liam hug cheering angel wave
RAVENGYPSY42
Truly beautiful ......
123whisper
Splended awasame poem dear friendwine
darkhorse555
thank you ever so much mick truly beautiful comment greatly appreciated dear friendangel cheers
Odette67
Stunningly beautiful poem Liam, your pen never runs dry where the beauty of love is concerned. hug purple heart
SCatlyn
I first saw this last night - so glad I was able to find it again. It was pure pleasure once again- this is just so beautiful- I can't do it justice with my limited poetic sense for words.

So will just say I love it!!!

SCatlyn teddybear
purple heart
darkhorse555
thank you kindly laura for the beautiful comment deeply appreciatedangel wine
Poetnumber1
Very beautiful choice of words to create such harmonic music. Enjoyed this very much.
Fellsman
Hi Liam

A generous helping of very romantic metaphor in this poem, almost as if it's Spring rather than Autumn over in Ireland. The fragrance of love hangs heavy in the night air with this sensuous write.

Best wishes

Bill cheers
ImagineLove
Liam you are a word weaver of beauty and love! So nice to read it makes me smile always! hug cheers Jade purple heart
darkhorse555
wonderful comment amy thank you ever so kindly deeply appreciatedangel grin
rapturecapture
Hi Liam

I would have to agree with the lovely Bill in this Romantic write.

Loved reading!...

Thank you for sharing.


Martina xxxteddybear hug bouquet
paloma66
You write such beautiful romantic poems DH,a pleasure to read.applause thumbs up
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