A painter of expressions begins stroking deeply gold threaded feelings in the warm silken soft tenderness weaving emotion touching sweetly kisses laying them with you deep inside love treasured within one thousand dreams
Your voice calls to me sweetly underneath velvet satin darkness catching a shining star sparks behind the curtains gifting one wish in your light upon a trail of dust sprinkling silver magically cast under your spell
All wishes landed on perfect the very day we met darling enchanting magic flowers singing waltzing butterflies dance spinning around the soul's heart and beauty adoring you love forever one lifetime with a dream
thank you ever so much mick truly beautiful comment greatly appreciated dear friend
Odette67Penrith, Cumbria, England UKAug 26, 2014
Stunningly beautiful poem Liam, your pen never runs dry where the beauty of love is concerned.
SCatlynBrecon, South Glamorgan, Wales UKAug 26, 2014
I first saw this last night - so glad I was able to find it again. It was pure pleasure once again- this is just so beautiful- I can't do it justice with my limited poetic sense for words.
thank you kindly laura for the beautiful comment deeply appreciated
Poetnumber1St James, Port of Spain Trinidad and TobagoAug 27, 2014
Very beautiful choice of words to create such harmonic music. Enjoyed this very much.
FellsmanLake District, Cumbria, England UKAug 27, 2014
Hi Liam
A generous helping of very romantic metaphor in this poem, almost as if it's Spring rather than Autumn over in Ireland. The fragrance of love hangs heavy in the night air with this sensuous write.
Best wishes
Bill
ImagineLoveVenus, Montana USAAug 27, 2014
Liam you are a word weaver of beauty and love! So nice to read it makes me smile always! Jade
Comments (18)
Ken
Regards Mick.
So will just say I love it!!!
SCatlyn
A generous helping of very romantic metaphor in this poem, almost as if it's Spring rather than Autumn over in Ireland. The fragrance of love hangs heavy in the night air with this sensuous write.
Best wishes
Bill
I would have to agree with the lovely Bill in this Romantic write.
Loved reading!...
Thank you for sharing.
Martina xxx