Peace and love[Paloma challenge]
Only when the trumpets roar
Angels in chorus, enchanting all music
The day our creator calls.
I surrender my soul, O Holy One, to you
He who casts, out all shadows, from the darkness
striking at the devil's door, he himself will kneel, guilty
To our maker and his.Bowing down kissing his feet
We will raise our hands in prayer
In a regal Heavenly sound, holding the very air, we breathe.
Golden flashing silver chariots on fire blinding with his lightning, Grace
Flashing of beauty, Glory be to God
They come racing out, from the gates, of heaven
We will bow in shame adoring
Each and every single knee,they will bend
In honor to, our Almighty King
He who is reverent ,Father,Lord and Master
When a sun will forever sleep
The sounds of weeping,them bathing, within pools of, a beautiful light
Weeps upon destination, our final day, judgement.
Our redeemer has finally come,unto to earth ,in our salvation
The moon shades red, her light in sorrow
Clouds nacreous upon gossamer wings
sweetly floats, upon a whispering breeze sweetly
Aeolian blowing through deep Psiturism passions
bleeds on our Passover, have mercy
Suffering blood of our brothers and sisters
Generations of our sins ,in the Heaven,s speak
Our Lord and master has spoken
only no one heeds, his Holy voice, or call
All this talk of war, makes one weep, with sadness
suffering in a world, where we are all brothers
born from our mother,s womb, sacred
Sisters reminiscence in past sins
Brought up, with the peace,within understanding and love of God
We are all his flock of children, lost
So much poison, shown on the television
We all sit back guilty and say nothing
This world we live in, is our world
Each and everyone of us, has a very powerful voice
Our rights to, freedom of speech
Ataraxia to all nations calls
Very little love, within this world
Less today, let us pray for tomorrow
We are controlled now, with mans own greed
How heartbreaking sad, it makes one feel inside
Power is in the hands, held with love and peace
With gentle happiness and joy, it would embrace
this ugly world ,we now, live in today
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Posted: Sep 2014
About this poem:
all i see is talk of war and mans cruelty so very sad
Comments (16)
the challenge Liam,
So much truth spoken,
War and inhumanity....
Peace must be sought !
Fantastic poem Liam, with so much truth.
A fine write
Bill
And, as previous comments have alluded to those, I'd just like to mention a different area - the line I find so purely beautiful - in thought and in your wonderful way of putting into words:
"...The sounds of weeping bathing in a beautiful light...our redeemer has come to earth
in our salvation"
Maybe my leaving out parts puts it in a different context than you meant(not sure), but it's a beautiful way to describe how one day there will be no weeping, no more goodbyes, 'no more sickness, no more pain, no more parting over there,
forever I will be with the one who died for me, what a day, glorious day...'*taken from the hymn 'What a Day That Will Be'
Beautiful poetry..... with a call to action
SCatlyn
thanks for your heart's sharing
reminded me of lines from the song "Let There be Peace on Earth
and let it begin with me" and yet sadly, what plays out is 'let it begin with you!!'
may we, one by one, truly begin with 'me!'