Peace and love[Paloma challenge]

Only when the trumpets roar
Angels in chorus, enchanting all music
The day our creator calls.
I surrender my soul, O Holy One, to you
He who casts, out all shadows, from the darkness
striking at the devil's door, he himself will kneel, guilty
To our maker and his.Bowing down kissing his feet
We will raise our hands in prayer
In a regal Heavenly sound, holding the very air, we breathe.
Golden flashing silver chariots on fire blinding with his lightning, Grace
Flashing of beauty, Glory be to God
They come racing out, from the gates, of heaven

We will bow in shame adoring
Each and every single knee,they will bend
In honor to, our Almighty King
He who is reverent ,Father,Lord and Master

When a sun will forever sleep
The sounds of weeping,them bathing, within pools of, a beautiful light
Weeps upon destination, our final day, judgement.
Our redeemer has finally come,unto to earth ,in our salvation

The moon shades red, her light in sorrow
Clouds nacreous upon gossamer wings
sweetly floats, upon a whispering breeze sweetly
Aeolian blowing through deep Psiturism passions
bleeds on our Passover, have mercy
Suffering blood of our brothers and sisters
Generations of our sins ,in the Heaven,s speak
Our Lord and master has spoken
only no one heeds, his Holy voice, or call

All this talk of war, makes one weep, with sadness
suffering in a world, where we are all brothers
born from our mother,s womb, sacred
Sisters reminiscence in past sins
Brought up, with the peace,within understanding and love of God
We are all his flock of children, lost

So much poison, shown on the television
We all sit back guilty and say nothing
This world we live in, is our world
Each and everyone of us, has a very powerful voice
Our rights to, freedom of speech
Ataraxia to all nations calls

Very little love, within this world
Less today, let us pray for tomorrow
We are controlled now, with mans own greed
How heartbreaking sad, it makes one feel inside
Power is in the hands, held with love and peace
With gentle happiness and joy, it would embrace
this ugly world ,we now, live in today
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Posted: Sep 2014
About this poem:
all i see is talk of war and mans cruelty so very sad

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Mizzy4
A special entry to
the challenge Liam,
So much truth spoken,
War and inhumanity....
Peace must be sought !

tip hat peace
Odette67
All this talk of war makes one weep

Fantastic poem Liam, with so much truth. purple heart angel
Fellsman
SNAP! I couldn't agree more Liam, as your poem develops you hit on more and more home truths - in particular, your reference to poison on television resonates strongly with me.

A fine write

Bill cheers
darkhorse555
mick smiling thought i would give it a try wonderful comment dear friend truly appreciated palangel peace
paloma66
A truly special entry DH,bringing into focus the present situation in the world with the given words.Wonderful response dear,thank you.angel hug
Odette67
Just read this again, you are a treasure Liam. angel purple heart
candykid
Excellent piece or work Liam. You distributed these challenging words perfectly throughout. A heavenly mix of emotion pouring out of your heart. Five stars pal.cheers
SCatlyn
This is beautiful... extremely well-executed writing and content. Excellent truths, very wise calls to heed.

And, as previous comments have alluded to those, I'd just like to mention a different area - the line I find so purely beautiful - in thought and in your wonderful way of putting into words:

"...The sounds of weeping bathing in a beautiful light...our redeemer has come to earth
in our salvation"


Maybe my leaving out parts puts it in a different context than you meant(not sure), but it's a beautiful way to describe how one day there will be no weeping, no more goodbyes, 'no more sickness, no more pain, no more parting over there,
forever I will be with the one who died for me, what a day, glorious day...'*taken from the hymn 'What a Day That Will Be'

Beautiful poetry..... with a call to action rose rose rose

SCatlyn
darkhorse555
ah chrissie your always so very sweet thank you deeply wonderful heartfelt comments dear friend truly appreciatedangel hug
darkhorse555
bill i am totally flattered with your comment coming from such a good writer heartfelt old pal deeply appreciated angel thumbs up
beautifulyou
hi dark,
thanks for your heart's sharing

reminded me of lines from the song "Let There be Peace on Earth

and let it begin with me" and yet sadly, what plays out is 'let it begin with you!!'

may we, one by one, truly begin with 'me!'


flower
darkhorse555
thank you pamola for the challenge and truly wonderful comment deeply appreciated angel grin
darkhorse555
so true mcd the bad ones always gets the news wonderful comment pal deeply appreciatedangel thumbs up grin
darkhorse555
christian truly wonderful comment pal thank you for being so kind deeply appreciated god blessangel grin peace
darkhorse555
scatlyn wonderful comment so true heartfelt beautiful we are like flowers born blossoming we have but a short span on this planet makes one think of wars as cruel destroying gods beauty thank you kindly dear friend deeply appreciated god blessangel thumbs up
darkhorse555
beautiful such an amazing comment so very beautiful thank you kindly dear friend truly appreciated bless you angel wine
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