OH HEAVEN MY HEAVEN

by WILDANDREADYMiami, Florida, USA

Mar 2015 691 Views 15 comments

OH HEAVEN MY HEAVEN

WHEN I WAS A LAD,I WAS NEVER SAD;FOR MY MOTHER, TRUELY LOVED ME!WE"D LAUGH, AND PLAY , AND SING SONGS ALL DAY; MY SWEET LIFE, WAS NO MYSTERY!NOW; I AM GROWN, AND SO FAR, FROM HOME; ALTHOUGH, LIFE, IS NO GUARANTEE;I PAID THE PRICE, AND THE SACRIFICE; NOW GREAT THINGS, ARE IN STORE, FOR ME!OH HEAVEN MY HEAVEN; MY POETRY MAKES ME FEEL FREE;I JUST ADD THE MUSIC, AND THEY BECOME SONGS; TO BE LOVED; FOR ETERNITY!

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Posted: Mar 2015

About this poem:

NEVER STOP TELLING YOUR PARENTS THAT YOU LOVE THEM!NEVER KNEW MY DAD BUT I"M SURE HE LOVED ME!I WAS GIVEN THE GIFT OF MUSIC!

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Comments (15)

mcradloffPlatteville, Wisconsin USAMar 14, 2015

My favorite song right now is Stay With Me by Sam Smith. I do my singing in my car as I live in an apartment and don't have much privacy at work to sing.

Since I grew up in the 80's, that is the bulk of my listening.

morgen90210singapore, Central Singapore SingaporeMar 14, 2015

I'm sorry i didnt comment on your poems
just coming back from the graveyard.shift
n twilight zone...but this is a beautiful poem
sure your parents are proud of you

online today!

socrates44San Fernando, Trinidad and TobagoMar 14, 2015

Travis

"I JUST ADD THE MUSIC, AND THEY BECOME SONGS"
This is very true of your poems and the way you write.
Just reading it, one can feel the music in it.

"MY POETRY MAKES ME FEEL FREE"
I am happy to see that you enjoy a sense of freedom with your poetry.

I wish you all the best.

WILDANDREADYOPMiami, Florida USAMar 16, 2015

mac; I can"t imagine , a world without music! keep on listening!

travis

WILDANDREADYOPMiami, Florida USAMar 17, 2015

MORGEN; ROCK ON! YOU"RE DOING GOOD!IF YOU LIKE WHAT YOU ARE WRITING; THAT"S THE MAIN THING!

TRAVIS