Reverence of my love - Paloma 's challenge

around me was Gossamer
shining upon my dark world

enshrined upon my teary eyes
was a Nacreous light
drawing me out
releasing my pain
from the clutch
of my broken heart

hesitantly, I looked around
and with the power of Ataraxia
I am overcome....

powerless yet defiant
I succumb to a Cosmogyral illusion

in my trance I was enthralled
and serenaded by Psyturism melody

in my surrounding, an Aeolian fantasy
which kept me hostage
in an illusion of reality.

for now there's nothing
that keeps me detached
from the Reminiscence
of our love

of which I will forever hold

in Reverence

now and for always
there's no other way.
~ ~ ~ ~ ~
Posted: Oct 2014
About this poem:
Dedicated to my past. Thanks my dear friend, Paloma.

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lindsyjones
Thanks for your visit and comments Fugitive.
ImagineLove
Sweetest friend, this is so beautiful! Paloma gave us such an awesome challenge! Love you both!hug
lindsyjones
Thanks dear Jade, my love always. teddybear
rapturecapture
Hi Lindsy...professor


bowing Best poem (in my opinion of course ) and they were all amazing out of Paloma's challenging challenge...This one is Top Shelf... I don't think I have ever read something so moving and loving....Amazing poem!!!
Loved reading really moved me.


Thank you for sharing

Martina xxx hug teddybear heart wings bouquet
paloma66
Filomena dear I first thank you for rising to my challenge then for having rendered such a soulful beauty I kept reding it over and over again and it brought tears,love can be so sweet yet so sad.I feel your pain sweetie I do.You have used the words with so much emotion.I loved it.Thank you again.Real write from the heart and thats the beauty of this poem.angel applause cheering thumbs up hug purple heart
lindsyjones
Martina how is the emerald isle and it's beautiful people?

Thanks much my beautiful friend. teddybear
niah9
words from the heart Paloma.....cannot be matched....teddybear Kathy
lindsyjones
Paloma my most endearing and compassionate friend. I will forever treasure our friendship regardless of whether love is kind to me or not. Those memories I have had with John, will never ever be lost let alone forgotten.

Thanks so much. I've written this long ago but wanted to keep it all to myself.

I love you my lady, love I love everyone here.
lindsyjones
Kathy my respect and thanks for your comments.

Always,

Pbouquet
lindsyjones
Losing someone is having the reason for awakening. From our fragile and most unguarded moments of wanting to reverse the water flow of life and our experiences. It's not the death of our time with each other, how can it be. The spiritual connection is not equated within the bounds of physical boundaries.
Love always lives within us, beyond displacement.

FOREVER.
jazzy75
Lovely write.hug
lindsyjones
Jazzy thanks and welcome back. Been a long while.
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