Open eyes

by RoCkStAr110Tampa (carrollwood), Florida, USA

Apr 2015 577 Views 2 comments

Open eyes

My pain falls down like rain
Can't you see my soul is bleeding
I'm barely breathing
Hesitating while I'm suffocating
Screaming so loud
But with no sound
I don't see the point in surviving
This is the truth no more lying
Inside I'm dying
Existence is a game with only one life
So grab the sharpest knife
Find the deepest vein
Don't let my departure be in vain
It's not me who's insane
I see the world for what it is
Now it's time to finish this
No more rat race
Let me settle this case
What you do don't matter
When you die who's going to be sadder
Being dead don't mean you're not alive
Who knows what's waiting on the other side
So embrace this last kiss
Because this is one you will miss
I am now not of the flesh
But a least I know what's next
And I finally get to rest

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Posted: Apr 2015

About this poem:

I JUST WANT TO SAY I ENJOY WRITING THIS WAY AND I AM NOT SUICiDAL!!!!

I write how I feel and I often feel like this life ain't real like its a game idk if I stand alone in this matter but i feel this way because of my life experiences let me know what u think

Comments (2)

mcradloffPlatteville, Wisconsin USAApr 3, 2015

I was listening to Dennis Leary. He is a comedian. "I'm not happy, I'm not happy. Listen, no one is happy. Happiness comes in small doses folks. You smoke the joint, you eat the cookie, and then you go back to #$%@ing work. That is it! End of @#$%ing list!" I once tried resting when I was 19, then realizing my mistake, I prayed for forgiveness, and then promised to never try to rest again.