A Week at Clare College

A Week at Clare College

A gentle softness of time settles on silent walls
While youth and future greatness scurries on inside your halls,
Marking a languid link with “then” and “now”
As scratchy ink from pen and thought from furrowed brow
Did prove its point and genius flowed from long-dead minds
Now move from joint liaison with “virtual” strangers’ finds.

With creaking floorboards on the curving stair
Rise up to view the greenness of your Quad out there -
Through mullioned glass you view the life walk by
A scullion ‘d pass; a few to knife and fork to buy
A meal in the café where Dons and staff and students all
Find time together, fat to chew, and ponder on the next May Ball.

The peaceful Backs from office window rear
Look over Cam and Fellows’ Garden near.
The gritted paths for centuries of shoes and wheels
Lay knitted garths around the grounds of yews and steals
Time out from study hard to offer rest and calmness from
The melee of the working day and relentless intercom.

One evening after work I strayed toward the town
At dusk; a lonely soul across the Quad , in brown
Raincoat; looked back at Chapel windows, soft-focused lit
And heard the practised evensong – and it
Was if I’d travelled back in time! To where the street
And modern city grime and Clare, were destined soon to meet.

I’ve left your hallowed halls and lofty rooms I’m sad to say ~
Some others stay behind to finish what they
Came to do and some are there for ever – well, you know
As long as our short life allows, and never want to go.
But Clare will stay and watch the changes over time
Protecting all her charges and her history, sublime.
~ ~ ~ ~ ~
Posted: Apr 2015
About this poem:
I spent a week temping at Clare College, Cambridge, UK, in 2010, and felt transported back through time to envelop its history, its culture, its journey through time and its atmosphere. The result was this poem which I originally set with a photo background of its setting on the river Cam. I hope you like it.

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Comments (12)

trurorob
Yeah i did like it, lovely construction and the picture it painted was so tranquil and I could imagine your week.
Rob
ChloeOskar
thank you ,so much.
Nuwahri61
Really enjoyed they way you constructed this ..............Thanks for sharing ...........Welcome to PC.......Regards Nuhandshake
ChloeOskar
Thank you, glad you enjoyed it.
socrates44online today!
Hello ChloeOskar

This is classic stuff: a journey back in time that reminds me of John Keats poem, "Ode to a Grecian Urn", when he says:
"Heard melodies are sweet, but those unheard
Are sweeter"

I love your opening lines which sets the tone for the journey:
"A gentle softness of time settles on silent walls
While youth and future greatness scurries on inside your halls,"


I am awestruck by the forcefulness of the line:
"The gritted paths for centuries of shoes and wheels"

Your closing lines:
"But Clare will stay and watch the changes over time
Protecting all her charges and her history, sublime."
create a very powerful piece of personification which wraps up the journey superbly.

Pardon me for my ignorance but I had to do a search re Clare College:

"Clare College is a constituent college of the University of Cambridge in Cambridge, England. The college was founded in 1326 as University Hall, making it the second-oldest surviving college of the University after Peterhouse. Wikipedia"

You are a very talented poet. I really enjoyed this poem.
Thanks for posting.
Have a lovely day!
ChloeOskar
Goodness! thank you for the compliment! Very much appreciated :)
Yankee4you
Chloe, Your write with such depth and feeling, truly I admire your style, in this most wonderful work. very happy very happy very happy
ChloeOskar
Thank you for your feedback, I am most grateful, and so glad you liked it. I had such pleasure writing it!
rapturecapture
Hi Chloe

Really loved reading A Week at Clare Collage... you captured the magic in this beautiful poem

Thank you for sharing

Martina xxxteddybear hug bouquet
ChloeOskar
Thank you, Martina. Very kind of you to say so. Glad you enjoyed it.
reguiny2006
Chloe,It reverberates through the soul, especially for those who have been or passed by Cambridge, you have the antique touch of Gray.

Phil.
ChloeOskar
Thank you, Phil, very kind of you to say so. I'm glad you liked it and it brought back good memories. For me, too!
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