lovecanberealSydney, New South Wales AustraliaAug 15, 2016
I quite like the idea of this x
RedexNorthumberland, England UKAug 17, 2016
I did like your poem, conjured up many a thing.
PlainoldJaneOPBoredom, Ohio USAAug 25, 2016
Thanks to you both!!!
fiscosagatolondon, Greater London, England UKAug 25, 2016
i know this tauntress.....and she knows
studecarsayre, Oklahoma USAAug 26, 2016
very nice poem, the message is clear, and what I really enjoyed is the rhyming, I think that makes a poem more interesting than free verse. keep up the good work. studecar
guitarpoet99Wendell, North Carolina USAOct 7, 2018
I like the rhythm, the phrasing in how the words flow with the punctuation. When I write, I will often follow the pace and phrasing of how one word flows unto the next. ‘Taunting’ has a nice - stepping up the stairs movement- by that I mean each of your couplets flow nicely (with a twinge of suspense) from one ‘setting’ of your poem to the next in the ascension to the ending. Favorite lines are She treks ‘cross your skin— Exploring each crevasse, with speed like a snail. guitarpoet99
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Exploring each crevasse, with speed like a snail.
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