Decaying love.

It seemed we were so pure.
We gave such tender loving care.
I felt so proud of us and sure.
we were so beautiful and rare.

Can't comprehend your rejection,
and contempt that I still care.
Hope lost in shitty recollection.
Love now a casual affair?

Helpless witness to collapse.
Feeling hopeless and betrayed.
Like rotting in time lapse,
Our love has now decayed.
~ ~ ~ ~ ~
Posted: Nov 2017

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IncubusBaig
Very profound.. thumbs up

Feel better hug
niah9
well written...every word clearly tells of emotions felt.....change that makes it hard to comprehend.
Kathysad flower
completenutter
Thanks so much for your comments and for reading, sorry it's so depressing lol
Writing poems helps me.kiss
godsprincess
Hi CN - we all write our poems according to our moods here. My last one was depressing too - it helps to get the emotions out there - a release. Welcome to CS corner.

Kathy wave
completenutter
Hey Kathy,
I was a regular writer here a few years ago here also, maybe you were here then too.
Nice to have my poems read again, thanks for your comment.x
IncubusBaig
Hey CN.. nothing to feel sorry about.. having a range of emotions is what makes us human.. smile

Love your name by the way.. thumbs up laugh
completenutter
Very sweet of you to say that IncubusBaig
Your reassurance is a welcome balm. x
IncubusBaig
Such is the power of words.. if only people realised it more often (myself included). tip hat

You see things differently... and definitely have the heart of a poet. It is blatant to even someone as crass as myself.

bouquet
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