O how the remorse builds up inside I leapt the wrong way Didn't have good to say barely thought to pray sinned from day to day It smothers me into a blissful respinterrupted by the searing anguish the lashes of demons the clawing of doubt gnawing away at my existence undermining my confidenceite
I am thoroughly trapped in the darkness no loving Master to dig me out He simply protects me from their attempts to end my life and my consciousness.
I feel every barb ripping out my tendons are gnarled my muscles are shredded I have lost the ability to cry
Yet, magically it somehow ceases I think myself totally weightless I float casually towards the light perhaps some stranger has saved me from such a plight
Back onto the tightrope so long ago the thunder booms the lightning glares and all I can do is cry
alone on a transfigured isle no wretched life but mine for miles the suns begins to unleash its horror but I refuse to surrender
Through the waves I dive and swim the current splits me out and in yet soon I am adrift at sea No way to go no no direction to see
Yet I shall swim forward because what lies in wait for me cannot be worse than what I have endured on that accursed isle.
My arms and legs begin to convulse Undefined becomes my pulse Flail about and hope for the best as the cold of the ocean collapses my chest
My eyes are slowly shutting this death is much more cunning Done in by my instinct to live drew me out to my fall
the seas swell and crash back and forth yet it's all so peaceful to me. I welcome the water to become an eternal part of me as I sink into the deep
No longer shall my accursed form nor manner of sinning despoil no more the purity that is left within this world I take my life so that you may live.
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Posted: May 2010
About this poem:
The final resolution of my critical reflection. Nothing more to be said, I think.
Emotional and powerful poem(s)....i enjoyed reading the series.
Blizza801Billings, Montana USAJul 8, 2010
I was a little confused about a few things...but since i myself am a confusing person I wont hold that against you lol. Despite what I did or did not get from the poem...I like the way you write !! Keep it up
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Despite what I did or did not get from the poem...I like the way you write !!
Keep it up