let it rain

by Unknown

Jun 2010 482 Views 12 comments

let it rain

Author: Unknown

and my love becomes a hurricane you won't need a umbrella only this fella i'll kiss your wet lips then move down ur hips you'll soak me with ur love and i'll give u that special hug your the one i think of all day your love will keep me dry from that rain until we get in bed again then true love guides my hand all over ur warm body why does everybody think this is funny. lol

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Posted: Jun 2010

About this poem:

i love the rain it's nice to enjoy it with that special someone ain't that something .

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Comments (12)

caroljoyceManchester, Greater Manchester, England UKJun 30, 2010

I don't think it's funny. I love getting wet and never use a brolly. good write Blackhawk.

Ladybee42East Liverpool, Ohio USAJun 30, 2010

i thought it was funny when i read, 'why does everybody think this is funny.lol'

it was merely amusing up to that point..

blackhawk70OPchicago, Illinois USAJun 30, 2010

thanks caroljoyce i love the rain especially thunder and lightening . perfect snuggling weather i would love to get wet with u now im singing in the rain. lol i thought people would think what i wrote was funny or weird . lol so thanks again beautiful . you made my day.

blackhawk70OPchicago, Illinois USAJun 30, 2010

ok ladybee thanks for raining on my parade .

up to that point u wrote lol you confuse me lady. lol theirs always one in the bunch.

agoodguy2havesuffolk, Virginia USAJun 30, 2010

let it rain, let it pour. ;-)

blackhawk70OPchicago, Illinois USAJun 30, 2010

let it rain let it pour let the old man snore .

let it rain cats and dogs just keep that lady out of my thoughts.

the black cloud cometh run everyone .

jazzy75Houston, Texas USAJul 2, 2010

blackhawk - nice poem...i look forward to reading more of your writing :)

blackhawk70OPchicago, Illinois USAJul 3, 2010

thanks jazzy your poems are really good.

MonaLisaSmile4UEl Paso, Texas USAJul 15, 2010

Well Done blackhawk, . . I felt the heat . . then needed the rain to cool me off, while reading . . I love a rainy night . . . and blackhawk the last line really was kind of funny . . in a cute kind of way. . . it made me giggle, giggle. . . A nice and fun read. Thanks

blackhawk70OPchicago, Illinois USAJul 15, 2010

thank you monalisasmile4u ur a sweetheart i love a rainy night oh yeah

raindrops keep falling on my head. oh yeah .

thanks again ur writings are beautiful .